Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

What a delightful celebration of nature! Your word choics are beautiful including "the glorious moon is first to arrive" and "the soft summer gown now shimmers in light." You capture tsummer and the transition into autumn so well. I can almost feel the warm breeze and hear the rustling leaves. So well done.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024

Thank you Michael for the supportive detailed review

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

A beautiful poem of "Days of Summer". I loved the personification of summer, leaves, shadows, flowers, but the moon is my favorite.

I enjoyed reading your delightful piece.

Blessings
Janet

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 Comment Written 04-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024

Thank you Janet for your lovely detailed review

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

I can tell that you have put a lot of thought, work and time into this smooth rhyming poetic tribute to Summer. I love the summer but will enjoy the coolness of fall as well.

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 Comment Written 04-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024

Thank you DonandVicki for your lovely detailed review