Patch and Ruby
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Patch and Ruby Fix Helen's Mews "Patch is Helen's cat and Ruby is Kenzie's cat
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Comment from royowen
What an amusing 'mews' with these two starring felines, Ruby and patch. I'm wondering how you managed to 'patch' two locations in the one photo. A great post to honour a popular fanstorian and two beloved pets, and a more than stylish post to boot, well done Debi, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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What an amusing 'mews' with these two starring felines, Ruby and patch. I'm wondering how you managed to 'patch' two locations in the one photo. A great post to honour a popular fanstorian and two beloved pets, and a more than stylish post to boot, well done Debi, blessings Roy
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Hi Roy, thanks for having some fun with me on this one.
This picture is just a couple cats on the internet that looked like Patch and Ruby. I might have to save this one.
I'm glad you got the part about the mews search came out as meows and that is why they picked the meow mix. Haha. I needed silly and this is always a fun write with the silly cats.
Thanks for the fun review and comments, dear friend. Love, Debi
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Well done Debi
Comment from jmdg1954
You're such a friend!
This post is wonderful to help Helen find her muse or mews in cat talk!
Meow Mix should be helpful. When eaten with milk, like cereal... yum.
Maybe if I find that it works, I'll try some, because I've no inkling to write at the moment.
Nicely composed, sis. Your posts always give me a smile!
Love ya.
John
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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You're such a friend!
This post is wonderful to help Helen find her muse or mews in cat talk!
Meow Mix should be helpful. When eaten with milk, like cereal... yum.
Maybe if I find that it works, I'll try some, because I've no inkling to write at the moment.
Nicely composed, sis. Your posts always give me a smile!
Love ya.
John
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Hi John, I knew that you haven't been writing lately and I understand.
After all I had to dig way back to come here to do this but they are fun.
I'm glad you got the part about the mews search came out as meows and that is why they picked the meow mix. Haha. I needed silly and this is always a fun write with the silly cats.
Thanks for the fun review and comments, dear BRO.
With Love and hugs, Debi
Comment from Jacob1395
I thought this was a fun piece to read and I could see that you really let your imagination run with this one. I thought you did an excellent job of putting it together, Debi and I really enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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I thought this was a fun piece to read and I could see that you really let your imagination run with this one. I thought you did an excellent job of putting it together, Debi and I really enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Thanks so very much, Jacob. I'm glad you got the part about the mews search came out as meows and that is why they picked the meow mix. Haha. I needed silly and this is always a fun write with the silly cats.
Thanks for the fun review and comments, dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Nicki.B
This is a wonderful poem Debi. It's so light hearted and so much fun.
It has lovely wit and rhyme and flow, the story and punchline are just great. I really enjoyed it, this made me smile and chuckle.
Well done to you and thanks for sharing your delightful poem!
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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This is a wonderful poem Debi. It's so light hearted and so much fun.
It has lovely wit and rhyme and flow, the story and punchline are just great. I really enjoyed it, this made me smile and chuckle.
Well done to you and thanks for sharing your delightful poem!
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Hi Nicki, I'm glad you got the part about the mews search came out as meows and that is why they picked the meow mix. Haha. I needed silly and this is always a fun write with the silly cats.
Thanks for the fun review and comments, dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Aussie
My friend the nut case. Losing your mews is a catastrophe! Beautiful pussycats (are they yours?) In London the old Queen kept her horses in the Mews, they still do. I'm just musing on your cheeky feline poem. Love K xx
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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My friend the nut case. Losing your mews is a catastrophe! Beautiful pussycats (are they yours?) In London the old Queen kept her horses in the Mews, they still do. I'm just musing on your cheeky feline poem. Love K xx
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Haha, Kace, my friend the nutcase. Boy, do you have me pegged. Hahaha.
I'm glad you got the whole thing and especially the part about the mews search came out as meows and that is why they picked the meow mix. Haha. I needed silly and this is always a fun write with the silly cats.
Thanks so much for the sweet and fun six stars too.
Thanks for the fun review and comments, dear friend. Love, Debi
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Haha, Kace, my friend the nutcase. Boy, do you have me pegged. Hahaha.
I'm glad you got the whole thing and especially the part about the mews search came out as meows and that is why they picked the meow mix. Haha. I needed silly and this is always a fun write with the silly cats.
Thanks so much for the sweet and fun six stars too.
Thanks for the fun review and comments, dear friend. Love, Debi
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Glad to cheer you up my dear friend. K xx
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, Debi
This is very cute. I'm thinking this Helen
is fictitious. But I also think you like cats. I love them too, but I can't have one because I'm disabled. I may still get one. I'll have to clean the box. So I'll have to get a big tall scooper because if I bend over, I'll fall out of my wheelchair.
I'll probably get one sometime after my surgery. That would be a good gift I could give myself cause there's no love like a cat's love.
I know you're interested in meter and you did a great job every single line has perfect meter except this one. It has nine syllables instead of eight and it is not, iambic pentameter
"So, Patch on her iPad would Skype"
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2024
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Hi, Debi
This is very cute. I'm thinking this Helen
is fictitious. But I also think you like cats. I love them too, but I can't have one because I'm disabled. I may still get one. I'll have to clean the box. So I'll have to get a big tall scooper because if I bend over, I'll fall out of my wheelchair.
I'll probably get one sometime after my surgery. That would be a good gift I could give myself cause there's no love like a cat's love.
I know you're interested in meter and you did a great job every single line has perfect meter except this one. It has nine syllables instead of eight and it is not, iambic pentameter
"So, Patch on her iPad would Skype"
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2024
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Hey, Pam. I didn't know that you too were disabled as I have been in and out of wheel chairs for forty years but like you are making the most of it. About this post, Helen is not fiction. She is Lyenochka. One of the grandest ladies of FanStory. She is a good friend and a few years ago I wrote my first piece on Patch and Ruby and they went along so well I did two more now.
About that one line though. It does have the right amount of syllables.
Even if it is off meter a little, it was the most important to me. It is always how the two cats meet up across the miles. I loved that line. It sounded kinda cool, didn't it? LOL...
thanks again Pam for the great review and comments. You are the best.
And good luck on your surgery. What are you having done? Debi
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So Patch on iPad then would Skype
Would have perfect meter
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LOL, I just like to be different some times. I am such a rebel. Haha.
I don't know why but love to throw a zinger in if I am not disrupting a whole lot. It gets boring every once in a while.
If I could, I would write everything Dr Seuss style. Haha.
Comment from Wendy G
Ha, ha, very good. Sounds like the cats are doing their best to help, and they have organised it well. Perhaps I'll order some of that for myself. A cute and funny poem. Well done.
Wendy
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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Ha, ha, very good. Sounds like the cats are doing their best to help, and they have organised it well. Perhaps I'll order some of that for myself. A cute and funny poem. Well done.
Wendy
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Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Haha, Wendy, thanks so much. I love that some got it all and I'm glad you got the part about the mews search came out as meows and that is why they picked the meow mix. Haha. I needed silly and this is always a fun write with the silly cats.
Thanks for the fun review and comments, dear friend. Love, Debi
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Haha, Wendy, thanks so much. I love that some got it all and I'm glad you got the part about the mews search came out as meows and that is why they picked the meow mix. Haha. I needed silly and this is always a fun write with the silly cats.
Thanks for the fun review and comments, dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from lyenochka
Hahaha! Thank you for the laugh. I'll be sure to enjoy my Meow Mix and start writing more. It's good that Ruby and Patch could have their little Skype chat!! So cute!
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Hahaha! Thank you for the laugh. I'll be sure to enjoy my Meow Mix and start writing more. It's good that Ruby and Patch could have their little Skype chat!! So cute!
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Hahaha, Helen, I was hoping you wouldn't be insulted with me playing around with your muse and your mind like that. Especially the part about aging parts, but then I have never seen your mind less than brilliant yet.
Thanks for the six stars on the fun cats. I was amazed that I found two cats that looked so much like them.
I'm glad you got the part about the mews search came out as meows and that is why they picked the meow mix. Haha. I needed silly and this is always a fun write with the silly cats.
Thanks for the fun review and comments, dear friend. Love, Debi
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Hahaha, Helen, I was hoping you wouldn't be insulted with me playing around with your muse and your mind like that. Especially the part about aging parts, but then I have never seen your mind less than brilliant yet.
Thanks for the six stars on the fun cats. I was amazed that I found two cats that looked so much like them.
I'm glad you got the part about the mews search came out as meows and that is why they picked the meow mix. Haha. I needed silly and this is always a fun write with the silly cats.
Thanks for the fun review and comments, dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
This is adorable. Can I borrow Ruby and Patch to fix my mews too?? Very clever use of the word MEWS to replace MUSE for the cats. The picture is so sweet. thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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This is adorable. Can I borrow Ruby and Patch to fix my mews too?? Very clever use of the word MEWS to replace MUSE for the cats. The picture is so sweet. thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Marilyn, I'm glad you got the part about the mews search came out as meows and that is why they picked the meow mix. Haha. I needed silly and this is always a fun write with the silly cats.
Thanks for the fun review and comments, dear friend. Love, Debi
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Marilyn, I'm glad you got the part about the mews search came out as meows and that is why they picked the meow mix. Haha. I needed silly and this is always a fun write with the silly cats.
Thanks for the fun review and comments, dear friend. Love, Debi