Still
Beyond The Reach Of Time45 total reviews
Comment from June Sargent
A lovely tribute to one who is gone but not forgotten. Seasons will continue to come and go. The sun will always rise and shine. But the world is just a shade less brilliant without her.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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A lovely tribute to one who is gone but not forgotten. Seasons will continue to come and go. The sun will always rise and shine. But the world is just a shade less brilliant without her.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much, June. xoxo
Comment from Sally Law
Virtual six, my talanted friend. I loved all of this and the repeated word: still. It drove the longing, ache, and sadness deeper with every verse. My condolences in your loss, dear Jess. Extra hugs too. Sending you my best today as always.
Sal Xos
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Virtual six, my talanted friend. I loved all of this and the repeated word: still. It drove the longing, ache, and sadness deeper with every verse. My condolences in your loss, dear Jess. Extra hugs too. Sending you my best today as always.
Sal Xos
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you, my Sally. That means the world!!
Xoxo
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Jessica, I think this is one of the most beautiful verses I have read to date on Fanstory. If I had seven stars to give, they would be yours. Perfect flow and rhyming but it is the expression of grief that is exquisite.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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Jessica, I think this is one of the most beautiful verses I have read to date on Fanstory. If I had seven stars to give, they would be yours. Perfect flow and rhyming but it is the expression of grief that is exquisite.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2024
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Ginda, that truly means the world to me. Thank you so much for your kind words of encouragement. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it and I am honored by the bookmark! Xoxo
Jess
Comment from Lisasview
Good morning dearest Jessica,
Oh my a poem that makes me cry early in the morning, here in cold Spain....
Of course I wonder who Kiki is? You obviously really loved this person...
Beautifully written,
Lisa
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Good morning dearest Jessica,
Oh my a poem that makes me cry early in the morning, here in cold Spain....
Of course I wonder who Kiki is? You obviously really loved this person...
Beautifully written,
Lisa
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much, my friend. This is for my sister who passed away eight years ago. xo
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Breaks my heart... I can not imagine losing my sister... I am the eldest...and we are all so close..
Lisa
Comment from QC Poet
A lovely tribute poem that seems to incorporate two definitions of the word Still-Again and Not Moving. I may have overlooked more but I liked its flow and would only suggest that there are more areas in the paragraphs where you can add the theme word Still into them either at the end or within even at the beginning without changing its flow. Thank you for Sharing your poem with us.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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A lovely tribute poem that seems to incorporate two definitions of the word Still-Again and Not Moving. I may have overlooked more but I liked its flow and would only suggest that there are more areas in the paragraphs where you can add the theme word Still into them either at the end or within even at the beginning without changing its flow. Thank you for Sharing your poem with us.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much, my friend, for your wonderful words.
xo
Comment from teafor2
Jessica, this, IMHO, is a great elegy for a 24 year old soul gone too soon... Scribe has empathic and adamantly lamented her beloved Kiki...The poem
readily serves as a tribute and a catharsis. Bless all concerned parties...I
hope that I have not misstated your intention(s) for the heartfelt write. teafor2
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Jessica, this, IMHO, is a great elegy for a 24 year old soul gone too soon... Scribe has empathic and adamantly lamented her beloved Kiki...The poem
readily serves as a tribute and a catharsis. Bless all concerned parties...I
hope that I have not misstated your intention(s) for the heartfelt write. teafor2
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Not at all, my friend. This was written for my sister who passed 8 years ago. Your words mean the world to me. Thank you!
Xoxo
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Grieving has no bounds, or timetable...
So sorry for your loss...Blessings on you and your family. teafor2
Comment from lyenochka
A beautiful poem for your beloved one who has crossed into eternity. Your sister? Your love still glows while still trapped in time and space. But I believe in Heaven, we are all there as in eternity, there's only "now" so the missing and grieving is only on this side of eternity, where we notice the flow of the seasons which you so artistically conveyed in words.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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A beautiful poem for your beloved one who has crossed into eternity. Your sister? Your love still glows while still trapped in time and space. But I believe in Heaven, we are all there as in eternity, there's only "now" so the missing and grieving is only on this side of eternity, where we notice the flow of the seasons which you so artistically conveyed in words.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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I appreciate that so much, Helen. Yes, this is for my little sister Kelly (aka KiKi). Thank you for your always inspiring words.
Xoxox
Jess
Comment from royowen
Obviously you've written this for someone much loved that has passed from this plain to another. But you've wrutten this so beautifully with all the caring gentleness with the hand of the skilful poet, beautifully written Jessica, , blessings Roy
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Obviously you've written this for someone much loved that has passed from this plain to another. But you've wrutten this so beautifully with all the caring gentleness with the hand of the skilful poet, beautifully written Jessica, , blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much, my friend xo
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Welcome
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Dearest Jess, I know how much you still miss her and I knew as soon as I started reading this beautiful tribute that it was for her. What a lovely expression of love for your sister. She would love this and tell you she is happy now, and how very much she cherishes you too. I understand what you mean when you say life and everything still goes on but you still miss and love her. Absolutely beautiful my sweet friend!
God bless, Sweetheart!
Love, Debi
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Dearest Jess, I know how much you still miss her and I knew as soon as I started reading this beautiful tribute that it was for her. What a lovely expression of love for your sister. She would love this and tell you she is happy now, and how very much she cherishes you too. I understand what you mean when you say life and everything still goes on but you still miss and love her. Absolutely beautiful my sweet friend!
God bless, Sweetheart!
Love, Debi
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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My Debi, thank you, as always, for knowing just what to say. I know you understand and I can't tell you what that means to me. Thinking of you!
Xoxo
Love,
Jess
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Love and Hugs.
I miss our dance!!
Comment from John Ciarmello
Hi Jess
This is, of course, beautiful. As I've said, you write with an evident passion and elegance that's hard to match. I hope this isn't an authentic experience for you.
best, JohnC
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Hi Jess
This is, of course, beautiful. As I've said, you write with an evident passion and elegance that's hard to match. I hope this isn't an authentic experience for you.
best, JohnC
Comment Written 26-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much, my friend. This was written for my sister who passed 8 years ago.
xoxo