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Comment from Dawn Munro
You, my dear Debi, are simply astounding. I can't tell you how thrilled I am -- this is wonderful! And I completely forgot you'd said you were going to write a poem for my birthday until you wrote to ask me some questions -- of course, all my sixes were gone by then!!!!!!! HAHAHAHA!II And I am just vain enough to say I want that rating for this terrific poem!!!!
Much love, Debi -- you're brilliant!
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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You, my dear Debi, are simply astounding. I can't tell you how thrilled I am -- this is wonderful! And I completely forgot you'd said you were going to write a poem for my birthday until you wrote to ask me some questions -- of course, all my sixes were gone by then!!!!!!! HAHAHAHA!II And I am just vain enough to say I want that rating for this terrific poem!!!!
Much love, Debi -- you're brilliant!
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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LOL, are you saying you forgot you were getting a birthday poem this week? Good thing I didn't forget that I promised you one weeks ago. Hahahahaha! It has happened before. I am not at all offended and still treasure our friendship. You are very welcome. The goal was to make you feel special, not me. LOL.. I am just happy that you are happy. That is what makes me happy and why I do them. God Bless, dear friend.
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Hey Sweetie, don't forget to read all of the reviews with all the sweet birthday wishes for you!!
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Thank you, thank you!!!!! Yes! For sure!
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God bless you, Debi. No, I hadn't forgotten really, I am just a bit cautious. People say things, meaning well, but can't follow through sometimes.
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Enjoy, as they are still coming in!!
Comment from Lisasview
Good morning dear Debi,
I know that Dawn will be trilled to see this wonderful Birthday poem... Ahhh, an Aquarius like me... we actually have loads in common...
I loved this not only because of the beautiful way it was wrtten but I got to know Dawn so much better!
Happy Birthday Dawn!!!!
Lisa
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Good morning dear Debi,
I know that Dawn will be trilled to see this wonderful Birthday poem... Ahhh, an Aquarius like me... we actually have loads in common...
I loved this not only because of the beautiful way it was wrtten but I got to know Dawn so much better!
Happy Birthday Dawn!!!!
Lisa
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Thank you Sweetie now get busy and send me some info about you.
Send as little or as much as you'd like but onlywf
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Okay
Comment from Douglas Goff
You would think a January baby would have turned out all frosty and cold but that is the opposite of Dawn. Happy Birthday Mrs. Munro you are not only a pleasure but a treasure!
Thanks for writing such an informative piece Debi!
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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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You would think a January baby would have turned out all frosty and cold but that is the opposite of Dawn. Happy Birthday Mrs. Munro you are not only a pleasure but a treasure!
Thanks for writing such an informative piece Debi!
D
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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Douglas, as always I thank you so very much for the awesome comments for another birthday poem for a fellow author, Dawn and her poem.
Now, I can't wait to do yours. Oh wait, I don't have your birthday, do I???? LOL.
Anyway, I hope that she, too, has been enjoying all the birthday wishes. Thanks again, my dear friend. Debi
Comment from karenina
Dawn will be pleased, I'm sure! You've shared quite a bit about her...
I didn't realize she'd been here since 2012.
The pink background is nice...the spacing seems so wide between stanzas!
There'd be less "scrolling" if you tightened up the presentation.
Probably Advanced Editor had its way with you!
Happy Birthday to Dawn!
Karenina
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Dawn will be pleased, I'm sure! You've shared quite a bit about her...
I didn't realize she'd been here since 2012.
The pink background is nice...the spacing seems so wide between stanzas!
There'd be less "scrolling" if you tightened up the presentation.
Probably Advanced Editor had its way with you!
Happy Birthday to Dawn!
Karenina
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Yes, I forgot to format it. Thanks for letting me know. Please let me know if it looks better.
What a difference it makes when you format. I appreciate you mentioning it. After looking at something so long, you loose ability to be objective. Thanks debi
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Oh my GOSH...what a difference that makes! Great job reformatting, Debi!
Comment from Jeano
Ah, Debi, what a sweet poem celebrating your friend, Dawn Munro. She must feel very honored. One little glitch, the sentence beginning with "A cook...." 7th stanza.
Either eliminate "would" or eliminate the (s) from make(s). It's just so special, like you.
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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Ah, Debi, what a sweet poem celebrating your friend, Dawn Munro. She must feel very honored. One little glitch, the sentence beginning with "A cook...." 7th stanza.
Either eliminate "would" or eliminate the (s) from make(s). It's just so special, like you.
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Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Jeano, you are a gem! Thank you for catching that typo. I was in a little bit of a rush to get it out before I went to bed, so thank you so very much!
Hopefully that's it! I owe you bigtime! Love, Debi
Comment from lyenochka
What a great poem for Dawn! And you told me much more about her work life than I ever knew. I'm so glad she sings in the choir at church and previous to Cleo, I read many stories of her Prissy.
Thanks for celebrating Dawn!
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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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What a great poem for Dawn! And you told me much more about her work life than I ever knew. I'm so glad she sings in the choir at church and previous to Cleo, I read many stories of her Prissy.
Thanks for celebrating Dawn!
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Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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Hi Helen, I was so happy that you were the first to review this. It meant a lot to me. Thanks for doing that.
And I thank you so very much for the awesome comments for Dawn and her poem.
I hope that she, too, has been enjoying all the birthday wishes. Thanks again, my dear friend. Debi
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I'm sure you helped make her day super special!! 💖😊💞