Patch and Ruby
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Patch and Ruby ~Hawaii or Bust~"Patch is Helen's cat and Ruby is Kenzie's cat
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Comment from Sally Law
That's it, your poem and accompanying video is proof we are the inferior species. Animals are so smart, cats in particular. I loved Ruby and Patch's plot to go to Hawaii or Bust. Bust it was and back to the warm bed. Precious, my friend.
I am watching the video in segments. My face hurts from laughing so I must take little breaks. This is a joy fir my reviewing day.
Sending you my best today as always and blessings abundant.
Love, BBB XOs
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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That's it, your poem and accompanying video is proof we are the inferior species. Animals are so smart, cats in particular. I loved Ruby and Patch's plot to go to Hawaii or Bust. Bust it was and back to the warm bed. Precious, my friend.
I am watching the video in segments. My face hurts from laughing so I must take little breaks. This is a joy fir my reviewing day.
Sending you my best today as always and blessings abundant.
Love, BBB XOs
Comment Written 18-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Sally, Thank you for having a little fun with me with this post. I appreciate your kind words for my silly cat poem.
Pease take care of yourself and have a Merry Christmas, my dear friend love, Debi
Comment from royowen
I can remember making two major moves when we had six cats, there was Soxy, Pinky, Snap, Crackle and Pop, Beep, Peter Habakkuk, and Suzy our female hound. They were a little traumatised, but hid in the house each time, but settled down eventually, they all lived happy, healthy lives. This is beautifully written Debi, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023
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I can remember making two major moves when we had six cats, there was Soxy, Pinky, Snap, Crackle and Pop, Beep, Peter Habakkuk, and Suzy our female hound. They were a little traumatised, but hid in the house each time, but settled down eventually, they all lived happy, healthy lives. This is beautifully written Debi, blessings Roy
Comment Written 18-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023
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Roy, I appreciate your awesome review and comments for this poem. I love the story of Snap, Crackle and Pop and the others. WOW! That is a lot of cats to move. I should have consulted the expert before I wrote. LOL?
And I loved all of their names too. Thanks also for the six stars too. You are so appreciated! I wish you and yours a very Merry Christmas! And may you have all the blessings that this wonderful season can give!! Lotsa Love, from my family to yours!! Love. Debi
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Bless you Debi
Comment from Lisasview
Oh my goodness girlfriend!!! When do you find the time to write!!! This one is so great... And the Funniest Animal video is a hoot... Made me laugh out loud...
Laughing is so good!!!
Hugs, your friend,
Lisa
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Oh my goodness girlfriend!!! When do you find the time to write!!! This one is so great... And the Funniest Animal video is a hoot... Made me laugh out loud...
Laughing is so good!!!
Hugs, your friend,
Lisa
Comment Written 18-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Lisa, Thank you for having a little fun with me with this post. I appreciate your kind words for my silly cat poem.
Pease take care of yourself and have a Merry Christmas, my dear friend love, Debi
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Love back to you...I so wish we lived closer... we would have such fun!!
Lisa
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Love back to you...I so wish we lived closer... we would have such fun!!
Lisa
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. I love all your cat idioms like "cat out of the bag" and even new cat words that you made up like "cat-chat" ! And of course, I'm glad that you let Kenzie and me know so we can be sure our one-life-left kitties will behave and stay safe! Thanks for the fun poem. Patch is honored!
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2023
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Lol. I love all your cat idioms like "cat out of the bag" and even new cat words that you made up like "cat-chat" ! And of course, I'm glad that you let Kenzie and me know so we can be sure our one-life-left kitties will behave and stay safe! Thanks for the fun poem. Patch is honored!
Comment Written 18-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2023
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Thanks so much Helen. I know I changed it after I sent you a copy, and I just now went and added two more lines to make that stanza complete. Actually it is the moral to the story. Thanks for letting Patch have a little fun with us.
Hope you enjoy the moral.
Comment from Wendyanne
This is such a delightful, well written poetic story about two cats. I enjoyed reading about their antics and their plan to visit grandmama in Hawaii lol. Very entertaining.
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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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This is such a delightful, well written poetic story about two cats. I enjoyed reading about their antics and their plan to visit grandmama in Hawaii lol. Very entertaining.
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Comment Written 18-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Wendyanne,
Thank you for having a little fun with me with this post. I appreciate your kind words for my silly cat poem.
Pease take care of yourself and have a Merry Christmas, my dear friend love, Debi
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am laughing so hard, I'm struggling writing this review, so it may not make any sense. This is creative and funny. I can actually see my two boys attempting something like this. Monty is angry with us because, he chose to use our fireplace as his litter box. My husband wasn't at all happy and said many bad words, loudly. I swear Monty understood every word and is now planning his escape. LOL Great post.
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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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I am laughing so hard, I'm struggling writing this review, so it may not make any sense. This is creative and funny. I can actually see my two boys attempting something like this. Monty is angry with us because, he chose to use our fireplace as his litter box. My husband wasn't at all happy and said many bad words, loudly. I swear Monty understood every word and is now planning his escape. LOL Great post.
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Comment Written 18-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Barb, 'thanks for having a little fun with me with this post. I appreciate your kind words for my silly cat poem.
Pease take care of yourself and have a Merry Christmas, my dear friend love, Debi