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Comment from Jumbo J
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I just shake my head in amazement each time you allow us to gain greater insight into all of your birthday delights... and a big Happy Birthday Sarah! Wow, what a journey!

You're such a clever-caring writer who brings us one step closer to knowing, not only who's birthday it may be, but always in a melodic rhyme, always giving us the snippets of information to makes us who aren't acquainted, want to be!

Beautiful dedication to Sarah, Debi. You never fail leaving a contented smile on my face sweet Lady!

With our thoughts we create...
sweet wishes.

Warm regards,
James.

******Star Exceptional!

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
    Hi James, would you believe I am almost done with thank yous from five poems in a row? They are all so important to me, but oh how I hate getting this far behind. So I appreciate you and others being so patient.

    I thank you for such kind words for Sarah's poem. Each one is so different and so special to me, so it is such a great reward to do these poems. Thanks again, my very dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Sarah Robin
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Wow! What a fantastic birthday card. I am thrilled beyond words. The time you spent on the poetry, the art work and the music is greatly appreciated. Thank you for accepting me into the group of writers. I am still learning from you all. You have made me feel like I am 18 instead of 81! Sarah
P.S. My last name is Robin.

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
    Awe, Sarah, that fits even better while I?m using an analogy of a little bird I was wishing it was Robin. Not sure how or why I though that, but J?m going in to make the changes right now. Happy birthday, Sarah! And you are very welcome.
reply by Sarah Robin on 25-Nov-2023
    I am impressed with the picture. You must have spent hours looking for those bits and pieces. I am going to have it framed for my desk. Thanks ever so much. Sarah
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
    LOL, lucky I didn't have pictures of your boys and grandkids, cause not sure I would have found room to fit a poem in too. Haha.
    Sarah, I am so happy that you are delighted with all of this. That is why I do these, because they mean something to someone. And that is the biggest reward I have ever had in all of my years of writing. I do put my heart into these, so that is all I ask is that you like it when it is all said and done. Changes can always be made, like the spelling of your last name. I was so thankful that it was Robin, because I made the reference about you flying like a spring time bird, so you made my day with that one. And if there is anything else that doesn't seem quite right, I would feel horrible if you didn't tell me. Anything can be easily added or subtracted and changed.
    So please don't hesitate to tell me, Sarah.

    As mutual friends of Terry's, that makes you pretty special friend to me too.
    Did he send you the link to the poem. I sent it to him this morning. Actually I know I have your email I could have sent it to you myself and will if you don't already have it.
    Happy Birthday again Sarah!! Love, Debi
reply by Sarah Robin on 25-Nov-2023
    I want to thank you again for making this my best birthday ever. Terry sent the link. More to come
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
    You just made it the best day ever for me too, Sarah!!
    Thanks for being so sweet!!
Comment from jmdg1954
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Fantastic birthday tribute to, Sarah.
I recall her bridge playing post
The one with Omar Sharif,
She held her seat quite steady
Probably had Omar sweating and in a lot of grief.
(Haha, my vain attempt at poetry)

I liked the lines that rhymed -
But Alec, Jessica and Chris are her precious grandkids

They're closest to her heart, they always get her highest bids

You matched up her grandkids and bridge playing, her precious commodities!

Cool that she's learning the ukulele, I play the banjo and recently picked up the mandolin.

Sorry I'm rambling on and on...
As usual a fine post!
Enjoy the Saturday.
John

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 25-Nov-2023
    Hey, I am bringing you to the front of the line to respond to you. Maybe I should have you partner in with me to do these. That poetry line was pretty darn clever, my friend.

    However, I'm not sure about what you said that you liked the lines that rhymed. Have you ever known me to write a line that didn't rhyme? Hahaha!
    Just yanking your chain, my friend.

    Thanks so much and I love the fact that you play the banjo and the mandolin.
    I play the dulcimer. Have you ever heard of one of those? I played drums and guitar as a teenager, and play piano by ear, so figured I could and I do a halfway decent job of it. My husband loves music so he likes it.

    Thanks again for the sweet review my friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Jacob1395
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I always enjoy reading your birthday poems, Debbie. You always bring the persons story to life so well with your writing, which is a real talent. Another excellent piece, I thoroughly enjoyed it.

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
    Hi Jacob, I thank you for such kind words for Sarah's poem. Each one is so different and so special to me, so it is such a great reward to do these poems. Thanks again, my very dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Lea Tonin1
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Another awesome birthday poem I've mentioned before I mentioned again. I think that's an awesome way to extend a birthday. Wish to somebody is through poetry a piece of yourself a wonderful and great gift! I am sure your friend appreciates it! That's always like I see no you should Or esthetics because your work is exemplary. I wish you best luck and a good night!

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
    Hi Lea, I thank you for such kind words for Sarah's poem. Each one is so different and so special to me, so it is such a great reward to do these poems. Thanks again, my very dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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What a fabulous life Sarah has lived, and still living! Your birthday poems give us more than just Happy Birthday, they help us get to know our Fanstorian friends a lot more. You're our Birthday Fairy!! Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
    Hi again Sandra, you are so special to me Lady, so please tell me you are taking care of yourself. I do worry about you. I hope you continue to know that I am always here for you.


    I thank you for such kind words for Sarah's poem. Each one is so different and so special to me, so it is such a great reward to do these poems. Thanks again, my very dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from royowen
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Another wonderful poem Debi, as always your love for your fellow fanstorians, you are credit to this site, and you're a treasured, precious gem and a handmaiden to the Lord. This is beautifully written, and honours Sarah so beautifully my friend, thank you for being such a servant to us, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023
    Roy, I can't thank you enough for the very kind comments for my poem for Sarah. I am tremendously blessed by your words, and I am so appreciative of your generous gift of six stars. Thank you again, my wonderful brother in Christ and awesome friend.
reply by royowen on 26-Nov-2023
    Bless you
Comment from Wendy G
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Sounds like a very busy and fulfilled life she has had. I join you in wishing her a happy birthday and a year of happiness. I like the collage of images as much as the poem. Well done for all aspects.
Wendy

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 Comment Written 25-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
    Wendy, you are always so thoughtful with your compliments so thank you for mentioning the art.

    I thank you for such kind words for Sarah's poem. Each one is so different and so special to me, so it is such a great reward to do these poems. Thanks again, my very dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Lisasview
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Never a day goes by with out another birthday poem wish from you dearest Debi... Oh gosh and the Osborne Bros You tube... really does add to it.
I just do not know when you find the time...
Lisa

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 Comment Written 25-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
    Hi Lisa, I thank you for such kind words for Sarah's poem. Each one is so different and so special to me, so it is such a great reward to do these poems. Thanks again, my very dear friend. Love, Debi