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Comment from Carol Clark2
How nice of you to remember Jan's birthday with a lovely poem and a great song. Yes, she would definitely get the humor. I love the rhymes you used, and the rhythm is nice also. So sweet of you to remember Jan's first heavenly birthday. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
How nice of you to remember Jan's birthday with a lovely poem and a great song. Yes, she would definitely get the humor. I love the rhymes you used, and the rhythm is nice also. So sweet of you to remember Jan's first heavenly birthday. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 22-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Awe, Carol, thanks so much for such a sweet review for Jan on her birthday. I have been hearing from many newbies who didn't know her so I just went and added something in notes about her and Abby. Isn't that amazing that I was able to find a black cat with a girl swinging on a star. And if you saw Jan's obituary, you would see that woman looks just like her.
Thanks so much for you kind words and for the generous six stars in honor of our Jan.
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It's nice of you to add an explanation for those who didn't know Jan. Blessings.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this birthday tribute to Jan. You're right her sweet spirit is greatly missed here. I think of her often. I know she is smiling at your wonderful poem.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
Thank you for sharing this birthday tribute to Jan. You're right her sweet spirit is greatly missed here. I think of her often. I know she is smiling at your wonderful poem.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Hi Barb, thanks so much for such a sweet review for Jan on her birthday. I have been hearing from many newbies who didn't know her so I just went and added something in notes about her and Abby. Isn't that amazing that I was able to find a black cat with a girl swinging on a star. And if you saw Jan's obituary, you would see that woman looks just like her.
Thanks so much for you kind words for her and her poem.
Comment from lyenochka
Beautiful tribute to Jan! And you even chose a lady with a black cat sitting and looking at the moon! Thank you for doing this on her actual birthday!!
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
Beautiful tribute to Jan! And you even chose a lady with a black cat sitting and looking at the moon! Thank you for doing this on her actual birthday!!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Hi Helen, thanks so much for such a sweet review for Jan on her birthday. I have been hearing from many newbies who didn't know her so I just went and added something in notes about her and Abby. Isn't that amazing that I was able to find a black cat with a girl swinging on a star. And you saw Jan's obituary, don't you think that woman looks just like her.
Thanks so much for you kind words for Jan's poem.
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I think the Lord brought you that picture! I reviewed while at the dentist, then went for last minute shopping and now for the crazy cleaning and preparations as we have our oldest and her whole family over for the next two days!
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I remember those days but we were younger then.ugh, I can't imagine. I worked hard all day on stuff I need to take and Im worn out. However I still make homemade stuffing, pies, gravy, etc My kids would just buy it so I do it every year. The stuffing they are afraid to try because mine is always perfect. Anyway, I hope the hubby is helping you. Tomorrow crash and let company help. Lol. Like you would do that. Have a blessed day, my sweet sis!
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I'm ready to crash now!
Hope you get lots of rest and enjoy the time with your precious family! 💖
Comment from Daylily
I am sure she would be so pleased with your beautiful birthday remembrance, Debi. Special people in our lives are always going to be missed after they are gone. I like your idea of looking heavenward and thinking of Jan swinging on a star.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
I am sure she would be so pleased with your beautiful birthday remembrance, Debi. Special people in our lives are always going to be missed after they are gone. I like your idea of looking heavenward and thinking of Jan swinging on a star.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Hi Lily, thanks so much for such a sweet review for Jan on her birthday. I have been hearing from many newbies who didn't know her so I just went and added something in notes about her and Abby. Isn't that amazing that I was able to find a black cat with a girl swinging on a star. And you saw Jan's obituary, don't you think that woman looks just like her.
Thanks so much for you kind words for Jan's poem.
Comment from Paul Manton
Lovely, Debi. (I assume Abby was Jan's cat?) Another sensitive tribute to a dear friend who left us far too soon.
Nice allusion to Jan's interest in astronomy, and to her care for animal friends. Also a nod to her kindness in going the second mile to help anyone in need - whatever that need may have been.
Love the Bing Crosby song - perfect for this tribute.
Paul
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
Lovely, Debi. (I assume Abby was Jan's cat?) Another sensitive tribute to a dear friend who left us far too soon.
Nice allusion to Jan's interest in astronomy, and to her care for animal friends. Also a nod to her kindness in going the second mile to help anyone in need - whatever that need may have been.
Love the Bing Crosby song - perfect for this tribute.
Paul
Comment Written 22-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2023
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Hello Paul, thanks so much for such a sweet review for Jan on her birthday. I have been hearing from many newbies (even tho I don't think of you as a newbie) who didn't know her so I just went and added something in notes about her and Abby. It was amazing that I was able to find a black cat with a girl swinging on a star. And if you saw Jan's obituary, you'd see that woman looks just like her.
Thanks so much for you kind words for Jan's poem. Thanks my dear dear friend.
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Sleep well (late in UK) Talk again tomorrow.
Love from Paul
Comment from BethShelby
I like you are reminding us once again of someone we all miss greatilly. Jan was so much a part of so many of our lives and we alwys were interested in the things she wrote about. I know Jan knew we all loved. One of her themes were stories of children dying and being happy to go to Heaven.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
I like you are reminding us once again of someone we all miss greatilly. Jan was so much a part of so many of our lives and we alwys were interested in the things she wrote about. I know Jan knew we all loved. One of her themes were stories of children dying and being happy to go to Heaven.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
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Thank you so very much, Beth, for the lovely comments on Jan's poem. She, too, would have appreciated them. Thanks again, my dear friend
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Debi, I'm so glad you wrote this poem for Jannypan, my friend. Gone but not forgotten. The presentation of the poem is lovely, as is the message. You brought in her interests, like veterans and astronomy and how willing she was to help other people.
Love to you both!
Rhonda
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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
Debi, I'm so glad you wrote this poem for Jannypan, my friend. Gone but not forgotten. The presentation of the poem is lovely, as is the message. You brought in her interests, like veterans and astronomy and how willing she was to help other people.
Love to you both!
Rhonda
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Comment Written 22-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
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Hi Rhonda, I sure appreciate your kind words for Jan's poem. I hope Jan can see how much she meant to everyone. I tried to tell her, but she thought people didn't like her. But I told her almost every day that I loved her, just like I love you my dear friend. Thanks again, my precious friend.
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Hi Debi! Thanks for responding to all those posts, lol, and I?m sorry it?s taken me so long to get back to you! I love all the poems you write. They are all done in such love. Everyone gets to read them and the responses.
I dearly hope sweet Jan is able to as well. I?m sorry if she felt people didn?t like her, because we did. I?m so glad you would tell her you loved her. I add my love as well. I know I sent her hugs. 🥰 I add love. And I love you, too. Thanks for all you do, and all you do behind the scenes, like helping other writers.
Hugs,
Rhonda
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It was never you. She always know youand a handful of others, but she took a lot of things to heart and I think it was because she had nobody outside of F.S. Unfortunately her only living sister wasn't very kind to her.
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Oh, that?s so sad. My sister and I have our moments, but I always know she has my back.
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I know.it is so sad.
I will sendyou Jan's obit and you will see how much she looked like the picture in my poem.
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Okay, thanks!
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I just sent you A picture of Jan to your email
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Okay I?ll check, thanks!
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I didn?t get it. I wonder if I gave you the right one.
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Comment from Sally Law
Virtual six for this beautiful tribute to our beloved Jan. She'll be swinging on a star for sure, especially after reading this poem! I loved every line, the stunning art, and song. Wishing for a ten to give you, my talented friend. Sending you my best today as always.
Love,
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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
Virtual six for this beautiful tribute to our beloved Jan. She'll be swinging on a star for sure, especially after reading this poem! I loved every line, the stunning art, and song. Wishing for a ten to give you, my talented friend. Sending you my best today as always.
Love,
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Comment Written 22-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
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Hi there, my sweet Sally Marie, I thank you for such kind words for Jan's poem. I hope Jan knows and can feel how loved she really was. Thanks so much for the kind comments, my very dear friend.