Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a very nice letter that you have written to God about the situation in our world today. It's so well expresses what your faith in Jesus and God's goodness shows. Have a great day and may God bless. Patricia

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023

Thank you Pat. I appreciate you reviewing this.
Beth

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

A clearly very sincere prayer to God for guidance and support, your message is beautifully expressed with care and consideration going into every word without sounding at all demanding or presumptuous in your thoughts or understanding of your faith. Para starting: "Lord you know... (be) and (come) should be one word. Thanks for sharing and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023

Thank you Debbie, I appreciate the review and comments.
Beth

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Beth, This is a very beautiful and very heart felt entry for the Dear God contest. The words flowed from your heart to our Heavenly Father. Thank you for sharing and Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023

Thank you Teri. I appareciate your review and comments.
Beth

reply by Teri7 on 03-Nov-2023

You are so welcome Beth!!

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A fine letter to God Beth, did you mean 1923 here or 2023? Best check it. I enjoyed your fine and faithful words here Beth, we all know the word of God but not everyone follows it, love Dolly x x x

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 Comment Written 03-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023

Thank you Dolly. I can't believe I worte that date which is way before my time. I fixed it I appreciate the review.
Beth

reply by Dolly'sPoems on 03-Nov-2023

Glad you could fix it Beth x x x

Comment from jim vecchio

Excellent

I did not need to enter this contest. You said everything I felt and could possibly write. Sometimes we need to lose our loved ones to truly comprehend the privilege of being able to call God "Abba, father".

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 Comment Written 03-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023

Thank you Jim, I appreciate your comments. Yes it is a privilege to have God consider us His children.
Betgh

reply by jim vecchio on 03-Nov-2023

And it's always a privilege to read your writing!