Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
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Comment from royowen
Well done with this excellent post, the challenge is finding enough similar rhymes, but you should be an expert by now Jim, a beautifully gathered and scribed work Jim, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Well done with this excellent post, the challenge is finding enough similar rhymes, but you should be an expert by now Jim, a beautifully gathered and scribed work Jim, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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A big thanks to you Roy.
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Welcime Jim
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem you have penned about the snowstorm and all the snow it brought. You used very good descriptive words and great imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for sharing. Teri
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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This is a very well written poem you have penned about the snowstorm and all the snow it brought. You used very good descriptive words and great imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for sharing. Teri
Comment Written 20-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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Teri, thank you!
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You are so welcome my friend! Blessings, Teri
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You certainly painted a lively scene in winter here and I enjoyed the fun in the snow and as we move into the winter season we have no choice but to embrace it! Much fun, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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You certainly painted a lively scene in winter here and I enjoyed the fun in the snow and as we move into the winter season we have no choice but to embrace it! Much fun, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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Smiles sent back, Jim
Comment from pome lover
Fascinating -three different aspects of a snow day, from sliding cars on ice-slick hills, to happy children sledding in the snow, having too much fun to feel cold, to a couple with a dog strolling in the park when it's snowing - all snow scenes with different messages.
Original and pleasant reading.
Katharine
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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Fascinating -three different aspects of a snow day, from sliding cars on ice-slick hills, to happy children sledding in the snow, having too much fun to feel cold, to a couple with a dog strolling in the park when it's snowing - all snow scenes with different messages.
Original and pleasant reading.
Katharine
Comment Written 20-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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Katharine, thanks for the review and comments!
Comment from RodG
You have PUT ME THERE in that park where it's snowing and kids are having fun sledding down a hill and a dog-walking couple are enjoying the drifting snow. I am not a fan of this rhyme scheme, but I enjoyed your tale. Rod
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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You have PUT ME THERE in that park where it's snowing and kids are having fun sledding down a hill and a dog-walking couple are enjoying the drifting snow. I am not a fan of this rhyme scheme, but I enjoyed your tale. Rod
Comment Written 20-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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Rod, thanks a bunch! I agree the rythmn scheme is too tight for my liking.
Comment from Mariah Mize
This poem very sweetly describes an almost perfect, country, snow day. Nowadays technology has very much taken over, the visuals I get from reading this poem reminds me of what snow days looked like when I was growing up.
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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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This poem very sweetly describes an almost perfect, country, snow day. Nowadays technology has very much taken over, the visuals I get from reading this poem reminds me of what snow days looked like when I was growing up.
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Comment Written 20-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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Mariah, thank you for participating with your review.
Comment from Zue65
Metered poetry is not really my thing. I am so poor in rhyming schemes. So, I am really in awe of poets who can cook words that rhyme. I enjoyed reading the lyrical lines in this poem. Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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Metered poetry is not really my thing. I am so poor in rhyming schemes. So, I am really in awe of poets who can cook words that rhyme. I enjoyed reading the lyrical lines in this poem. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 20-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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Nassus, thank you for plowing through this metered poem. I am first a Free verser, so I can relate to your comment on a personal level. Be well!