Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 86 "I am Indigo"Musings of an old man - 2022
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Comment from nomi338
While blue is royal, loyal and true, it can also describe being sad. But it will never be used or confused with the fun that you once had. As a fan of the Michigan Wolverine football and basketball teams, I am also a fan of Big Blue. So, yeah blue is big with me. I think your poem is awesomely good and deserve a blue ribbon.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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While blue is royal, loyal and true, it can also describe being sad. But it will never be used or confused with the fun that you once had. As a fan of the Michigan Wolverine football and basketball teams, I am also a fan of Big Blue. So, yeah blue is big with me. I think your poem is awesomely good and deserve a blue ribbon.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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Nomi. you have the poem in hand write it up and send it in, I would not be blue about my friend who could win! Go big Blue!
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OK, I think I will.
Comment from Marienkiefer
A very nicely crafted poem that offers readers various perceptions of colour and explores the wisdom and intuitiveness of the colour blue.
-You make interesting associations to this colour, tied into key emotions: the love and intuitiveness of blue.
A very pleasant read. All the best.
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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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A very nicely crafted poem that offers readers various perceptions of colour and explores the wisdom and intuitiveness of the colour blue.
-You make interesting associations to this colour, tied into key emotions: the love and intuitiveness of blue.
A very pleasant read. All the best.
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Comment Written 24-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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Marien, thank you for reviewing my post.
Comment from papa55mike
I prefer a lighter color of blue, but Indigo works. I love the format and rhyme. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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I prefer a lighter color of blue, but Indigo works. I love the format and rhyme. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Comment Written 24-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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Hey Mike, haven't seen you asround, I really hope you are doing well! thanks for the review!