Ode to Jake
A very good friend33 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with this ode to your friend, Willie.
I enjoyed reading it. Your lines flowed smoothly with
great rhymes. I could picture you and Jake, then you
writing this ode. Your words were well chosen--I liked
the authentic speech of cowboys.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
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You did a great job with this ode to your friend, Willie.
I enjoyed reading it. Your lines flowed smoothly with
great rhymes. I could picture you and Jake, then you
writing this ode. Your words were well chosen--I liked
the authentic speech of cowboys.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 21-Oct-2022
Comment from Raul1
Nice story in a poem about the reaper and it is well written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poem. It is clear and concise. Thank you for sharing!
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Nice story in a poem about the reaper and it is well written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poem. It is clear and concise. Thank you for sharing!
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Comment Written 21-Oct-2022
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Excellent. Too bad I'm out of sixes.
I like the flow, the feel. I can sense the friendship.
Your poem would make a good song.
Best wishes.
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Excellent. Too bad I'm out of sixes.
I like the flow, the feel. I can sense the friendship.
Your poem would make a good song.
Best wishes.
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Comment Written 21-Oct-2022