Bad Boy Ric
Lunch at the HotHouse, part two.35 total reviews
Comment from GWHARGIS
Really good installment. I like the Cheers mentality of the core group. I think Ric held his own pretty good considering they are a well oiled machine. Couple of spags. One spot you said bad boy and another your put bad, boy. Then there was comming your direction sweetie. One M in coming. But a great installment. Gretchen
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Really good installment. I like the Cheers mentality of the core group. I think Ric held his own pretty good considering they are a well oiled machine. Couple of spags. One spot you said bad boy and another your put bad, boy. Then there was comming your direction sweetie. One M in coming. But a great installment. Gretchen
Comment Written 24-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Gretchen, I am glad you are enjoying the story. Thank you for the edits and they have been changed. Terry.
Comment from John Ciarmello
Ha! You've created a line of characters familiar to us and have done it brilliantly, Terry! That aside, I love the storyline and the drama! I'm all in for "Last Call." Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Ha! You've created a line of characters familiar to us and have done it brilliantly, Terry! That aside, I love the storyline and the drama! I'm all in for "Last Call." Best, JohnC
Comment Written 24-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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John, I am delighted you find it fun, and thank you for the review. Terry.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Loved the story, loved the note. I really enjoy the way you are tying together your different posts of different types. I will run out of sixes too fast if you keep posting, haha. Kate xx
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Loved the story, loved the note. I really enjoy the way you are tying together your different posts of different types. I will run out of sixes too fast if you keep posting, haha. Kate xx
Comment Written 24-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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LOL, Thank you for the six stars. I think the next post on this story will be next weekend. Thank you for reading and reviewing. Terry.
Comment from irishauthorme
Yeah, well you set the stage here for the next chapter. The 'free ticket' deal was great for getting more people out to hear the band.
And, you damn near told the story of my life. I played lead guitar with country bands all over the American West, and played music by every country star you listed here.
For certain, on our repeated route, there was a covey of followers in almost every town. If I remember correctly, the ladies were just as happy that we were only going to be there for a short while.
Great story!
irish
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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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Yeah, well you set the stage here for the next chapter. The 'free ticket' deal was great for getting more people out to hear the band.
And, you damn near told the story of my life. I played lead guitar with country bands all over the American West, and played music by every country star you listed here.
For certain, on our repeated route, there was a covey of followers in almost every town. If I remember correctly, the ladies were just as happy that we were only going to be there for a short while.
Great story!
irish
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Comment Written 24-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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LOL, thank you, Irish! I love your review. Terry.
Comment from nomi338
I love a story that has the kind of people I would like to know. These characters are very likable. Laid back, easy going. They like each other and have the freedom to speak freely about short comings, misadventures and such, without anyone getting their feelings hurt. I would like to know these people and maybe even hang out with them.
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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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I love a story that has the kind of people I would like to know. These characters are very likable. Laid back, easy going. They like each other and have the freedom to speak freely about short comings, misadventures and such, without anyone getting their feelings hurt. I would like to know these people and maybe even hang out with them.
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Comment Written 24-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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Nomi, thank you for reading, I think you would fit in really well. Terry.