Comment from royowen

Excellent

I know your trying to make this poem quirkily clever, but it doesn't quite cut it, you fall short on the grammar, I would try to rewrite it, with a little more though, good try, blessings Roy
Typo : treat your friend (good) well? 2: as special as they (could)? Are? My play poem's a star?

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022

Thanks.Roy. Yes, I know grammatically it didn't make sense, but it wasn't supposed to. It was done like that to be a fun and silly Dr Suess type where the words were doubly used to be fun but to teach the kids kindness, not proper speech. It was to hold their attention. I do appreciate your feedback so much my friend, but just thought I should explain that I those were all the parts that took the longest to come up so they may get a chuckle.
Just curious if you read it again, knowing that if it might look different?
Thanks my dear friend.

reply by royowen on 27-Sep-2022

Pleasure

Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

Very cute. I love kids poems. The rhymes are good and I did not see any grammatical issues.

We are competing against each other on this one so I will wish you good luck to get second LOL.

Keep up the good work!

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 Comment Written 27-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022

Douglas I sure hope your not wishing second in to any others in the contests my friend! But I guess that's better than not placing. Thanks for your kind words my friend. So appreciated..

reply by Douglas Goff on 27-Sep-2022

Just having fun with you. It's more about the experience for me than winning. Good luck to you!

reply by the author on 28-Sep-2022

I knew that and I was just having some fun back w you. Thanks Douglas.