Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 106 "In a state of flux"Musings of an old man - 2022
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Comment from harmony13
The author's words were exceptional of the assessment of life today. For me, It is exactly the way it is today! I found the words to be true, unexplainable, strong, clear, descriptive and creative. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and compliments this poem.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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The author's words were exceptional of the assessment of life today. For me, It is exactly the way it is today! I found the words to be true, unexplainable, strong, clear, descriptive and creative. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and compliments this poem.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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harmony13, you are simply the best always with your supportive comments and reviews, I am honored by the sixers -- thank you!
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You are so welcome! I really liked that
you addressed this because it drives me
crazy! Have a great day!
Comment from Sally Law
Time loss seems to be an ongoing question these days, especially in this age of fast breaking news, super fast internet, and major events morphing from one to another. I yearn for a simpler, slower time, even now. Beautifully penned and illustrated, dear J.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal :))
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Time loss seems to be an ongoing question these days, especially in this age of fast breaking news, super fast internet, and major events morphing from one to another. I yearn for a simpler, slower time, even now. Beautifully penned and illustrated, dear J.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal :))
Comment Written 28-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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thank you, Sal ... be well this long holiday weekend!
Comment from prettybluebirds
Well, this poem is definitely something different, but in a good way. I truly enjoyed reading this and look forward to more of your writings. The artwork is perfect for the subject of the poem. Good luck in the contest.
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Well, this poem is definitely something different, but in a good way. I truly enjoyed reading this and look forward to more of your writings. The artwork is perfect for the subject of the poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Smiling back! thanks ...
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You are right as in this fast world nothing seems permanent anymore, laws are changing every day and it is hard to keep up with the latest trend that will also be considered history soon. I would things just to stay the same for a while so that I can get my breath and catch up, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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You are right as in this fast world nothing seems permanent anymore, laws are changing every day and it is hard to keep up with the latest trend that will also be considered history soon. I would things just to stay the same for a while so that I can get my breath and catch up, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Thanks Dolly, be well!
Comment from Fleedleflump
That's an awesome closing line - sums up how we often respond to things changing. The very existence of the Ubi Sunt shows how change has always happened through history, and always been met with both excitement and bafflement.
I thought you did a great job with this one.
Mike
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That's an awesome closing line - sums up how we often respond to things changing. The very existence of the Ubi Sunt shows how change has always happened through history, and always been met with both excitement and bafflement.
I thought you did a great job with this one.
Mike
Comment Written 28-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Mike I surely do appreciate your comments - which ring so true. Thank you, sir!
Comment from dragonpoet
JLR,
If letting your mind wander lets you write poems like this than keep letting it wander. The world is impermanent. Everything wanes or waxes as the world goes round like the bicycle wheel. And maybe those neighbors would have less to complain about if they did something about the things they don't like. If is possible.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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JLR,
If letting your mind wander lets you write poems like this than keep letting it wander. The world is impermanent. Everything wanes or waxes as the world goes round like the bicycle wheel. And maybe those neighbors would have less to complain about if they did something about the things they don't like. If is possible.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
P S If you would like, could you please let me know your name?
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Comment Written 28-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2022
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Hello Joan, thanks for sharing your wisdom, our world seems to be a stage for the most obtuse to scream loudly from but they really have nothing of interest to say. :) I am Jim.
Be well, be very, very well! 🙏🙏🎶🎶🎶🎶
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You?re very welcome, Jim.
Thanks for the good heath wishes.
Joan