Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

A very fine free verse poem full of summer images of that day at the beach. It is the beginning of summer and a day when the crowds are lighter and your words let the reader observe and enjoy the day too.
Best wishes,
Mary

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022

Mary, thank you!

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

A beautifully written free verse poem with lovely imagery to make the readers feel like they are right there beside you on this morning excursion to the beach.
Well done
Blessings
Jy

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 Comment Written 30-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022

Hi Janet, as always your reviews and comments are most welcomed and appreciated. I trust you will have a marvelous weekend, thank you, JLR

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

Hi there! This is a fine piece of descriptive free verse, where he imagery created in the poem places it comfortably within the parameters of the club's prompt.

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 Comment Written 30-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022

hey Boss Bartlett! Wow, a big thank you! I do hope that you are walking life's path and not kicking up to my dust long the journey.

reply by Pantygynt on 30-Apr-2022

Yeah this bloke's still oke!