A Father's Love
A Hunting Trip Gone Wrong34 total reviews
Comment from T B Botts
Oh my word! What a terrifying ordeal. I hate snakes. When I was in Charleston South Carolina there were snakes all over the place. I always had to watch where I was watching. You told this story very convincingly. Poor Tom, he's going to come back with a rope, but his dad won't be in a position to grab it. Well done.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Oh my word! What a terrifying ordeal. I hate snakes. When I was in Charleston South Carolina there were snakes all over the place. I always had to watch where I was watching. You told this story very convincingly. Poor Tom, he's going to come back with a rope, but his dad won't be in a position to grab it. Well done.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Thank you for reading and commenting. I hate snakes too. Maybe that's whay I made them the monsters in this story.
Comment from nomi338
As sad as the ending, the dad accomplished his stated goal, to save his son no matter what. Fortunately I have never been put into this situation yet, but like the dad in this story I would like to think that I would place either one of my children or grand children's life ahead of mine. Especially since I am now 78 years old. This is a sad yet exciting to read, well written story of adventure.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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As sad as the ending, the dad accomplished his stated goal, to save his son no matter what. Fortunately I have never been put into this situation yet, but like the dad in this story I would like to think that I would place either one of my children or grand children's life ahead of mine. Especially since I am now 78 years old. This is a sad yet exciting to read, well written story of adventure.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Thank you for reading and commenting. Not all stories have happy endings.
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True. The ultimate object of the story teller is to tell all tales whether happy or sad
Comment from in777wr#
The ending was horrific. This story had my attention from beginning to end. I could not imagine being in that situation. The story was well written, and reads well. I could feel what the father was going through. Your words painted a vivid description. The snake "waiting for an excuse to attack" stood out to me. Good job.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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The ending was horrific. This story had my attention from beginning to end. I could not imagine being in that situation. The story was well written, and reads well. I could feel what the father was going through. Your words painted a vivid description. The snake "waiting for an excuse to attack" stood out to me. Good job.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Thank you. I hate snakes and it wasn't difficult to make them the monsters in the story. Not all stories have a happy ending.
Comment from jessizero
This was harrowing! You managed to keep the reader's interest from the first sentence to the very last. You did a great job! Keep up the good work.
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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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This was harrowing! You managed to keep the reader's interest from the first sentence to the very last. You did a great job! Keep up the good work.
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Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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Thank you for reading and commenting. Snakes are a phobia of mine so I don't know why I wrote about them.