Poppy and Odi's Mission
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Poppy and Odi's Mission 2"A Cube 16 Poem Book
62 total reviews
Comment from royowen
I think to pull a killer whale's tooth and be a small child would be something of an act of extreme bravery and to breath underwater for kids would be hard, even in hardening bubbles. Another brilliant kid's poem my friend Sandra, these are so good, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2021
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I think to pull a killer whale's tooth and be a small child would be something of an act of extreme bravery and to breath underwater for kids would be hard, even in hardening bubbles. Another brilliant kid's poem my friend Sandra, these are so good, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2021
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Yes, these children are very brave, Roy, but are they strong enough to pull the tooth out? Hmm. Thank you, dear friend, for reading part 2. I hope you will join me for part three. Warm hugs, my wonderful friend. Sandra xxx
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I don?t think I could?ve?I couldn?t now
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I'm with you on that! Lol. xxx
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Thanks Sandra
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Sandra!
What a joy to read!
So lyrical and just plain FUN!
Robert's Cube 16 format lends itself very well to this children's poem.
Love the premise and presentation!
Kudos!
diane
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2021
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Hello Sandra!
What a joy to read!
So lyrical and just plain FUN!
Robert's Cube 16 format lends itself very well to this children's poem.
Love the premise and presentation!
Kudos!
diane
Comment Written 29-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much for this lovely review, Diane. I'm chuffed to bits you enjoyed the story. Part three coming soon. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra
Comment from dragonpoet
The queen is smart about the bubbles, but why don't the children use scuba gear. Odi has a good question about the whale doing this a trap to have a meal. Maybe scuba gear could stop that. But then it would be less of a fantasy tale. Can't wait to see what happens next. I like all the illustations.
Joan
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2021
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The queen is smart about the bubbles, but why don't the children use scuba gear. Odi has a good question about the whale doing this a trap to have a meal. Maybe scuba gear could stop that. But then it would be less of a fantasy tale. Can't wait to see what happens next. I like all the illustations.
Joan
Comment Written 29-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2021
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I did think of scuba gear, but that wasn't quite as magical. The bubbles were already there, and why not use them? LOL. I know in real-life they would pop, but this isn't real-life! That is the amazing thing about fantasy, everything is possible! Thank you so much, dear Joan, for this lovely review. The next part will be coming soon. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
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Couldn't they have waved a magic wand to give them scuba gear. The bubbles were a good idea though.
You're very welcome, Sandra.
Joan
Comment from Janet Foor
Delightful! A wonderful chapter of Poppy and Odi's Mission. I'm sure the grandchildren of your friend will enjoy this thoughtful story with a teachable moment or two.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2021
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Delightful! A wonderful chapter of Poppy and Odi's Mission. I'm sure the grandchildren of your friend will enjoy this thoughtful story with a teachable moment or two.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 29-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much for reading part two, Janet. I'm delighted you enjoyed it. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Teri7
Sandra, This is so nice and so well written. I know those grandchildren will love either reading this or having it read to them. You used great descriptive words and I love the Cube form you have chose to write it in. The art work is great too. Thank you for sharing with us. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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Sandra, This is so nice and so well written. I know those grandchildren will love either reading this or having it read to them. You used great descriptive words and I love the Cube form you have chose to write it in. The art work is great too. Thank you for sharing with us. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 29-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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Thank you so much, Teri! What a really lovely review. I told Robert when he first introduced the cube 16, that it would be perfect for a story I had in mind. 'Scout and her Magical Unicorn' and it was. I'm hoping this one will catch the children's imaginations, too. I'm delighted you enjoyed this one. Thank you so much for the sixth gold star, my friend. I really appreciate that. I replied to your message, but it went so fast, I don't know if it actually did or was deleted. Can you let me know if you got it? Thanks again, Teri. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
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I did get it and responded, but I will tell you I will be looking into that. I love that story. I want to check in to more of your children's work too. I know you are great at everything you write I just don't read books like I used to. I have gone to the books on CD to listen to when I get ready for bed. lol Can you tell I am 65 now and not a spring chicken anymore! lol Thank you so much! love, Teri
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
Pulling the tooth can be hard enough but knowing you might have climb inside the mouth would be very alarming. However, kids usually don't have too much fear and given the right kid I could see them doing it. I can't wait to see if they are able to pull it out.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2021
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Pulling the tooth can be hard enough but knowing you might have climb inside the mouth would be very alarming. However, kids usually don't have too much fear and given the right kid I could see them doing it. I can't wait to see if they are able to pull it out.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2021
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It's going to be a tough one! Thank you so much for your lovely review, my friend. I'm so happy you enjoyed part two. Warm hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment from amada
I like to read children stories, even if I am well over childhood. Still, I think in all of us, no matter at what age there is that glimpse of childhood...it reminds me of reading to my granddaughter, now in college...Reading to her those magical stories brought us wonder.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2021
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I like to read children stories, even if I am well over childhood. Still, I think in all of us, no matter at what age there is that glimpse of childhood...it reminds me of reading to my granddaughter, now in college...Reading to her those magical stories brought us wonder.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2021
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You are so right. It's nice that we do, too. Thank you for reading mine, my friend. Warm hugs. Sandra xxx
Comment from Eunice Amero
If you don't get accepted to get this on T.V. it won't be your fault. This is so good it would be nice in a little book for kids. I love it. I enjoyed it. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. Can't wait for the rest.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2021
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If you don't get accepted to get this on T.V. it won't be your fault. This is so good it would be nice in a little book for kids. I love it. I enjoyed it. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. Can't wait for the rest.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2021
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Aww, Bless your heart, thank you so much for those lovely words, Eunice, that is so nice of you. I'm overjoyed that you liked this part of the story. And thank you for the golden sixth star! Now we have to see if Poppy and Odi will help the whale ... I think they will! Lol. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
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I hope they will. I love this little story. You are more than welcome
Comment from aryr
This is a great continuation chapter of the poem/coloring book, Sandra. It definitely sounds like the mermaid has met the first challenge of getting Poppy and Odi's ability to breathe under water. Now she just has to get the children to agree. I really enjoy this adventure, it is very well done. The story has a wonderful flow and rhyme. Great job. Blessings, hugs and smiles.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2021
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This is a great continuation chapter of the poem/coloring book, Sandra. It definitely sounds like the mermaid has met the first challenge of getting Poppy and Odi's ability to breathe under water. Now she just has to get the children to agree. I really enjoy this adventure, it is very well done. The story has a wonderful flow and rhyme. Great job. Blessings, hugs and smiles.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2021
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Thank you, Alie, I'm so pleased you are liking this little adventure. Now to see if they will agree to help the whale! Hmm, I'm not sure I would trust it, Lol. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
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You are so welcome Sandra. I for sure would not trust being swallowed by a whale. Yuk, being whale food is nasty. Blessings.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Thank you for sharing this new chapter in your story. Your poem is well written, and arousing interest in what is going to happen. Your illustrations are great as well. Looking forward to what comes next.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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Thank you for sharing this new chapter in your story. Your poem is well written, and arousing interest in what is going to happen. Your illustrations are great as well. Looking forward to what comes next.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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Hi Anne, thank you for another lovely review, for part two! I'm so pleased you are still enjoying it. Part three coming soon. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
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You are welcome, Sandra