Wild Tim and the Widder Lady
A wild and wooly cowboy poem.26 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Awesome poem and it does sound cowboy=sh :"Tim wus a cowboy,
Back when cowboyn' wus tuff'.
His life wus very hard
And his manner ruff'.
Sometimes all you need is a ray of sunshine to change your ways. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Awesome poem and it does sound cowboy=sh :"Tim wus a cowboy,
Back when cowboyn' wus tuff'.
His life wus very hard
And his manner ruff'.
Sometimes all you need is a ray of sunshine to change your ways. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Thank you, Iza, for your review and stars, from me, Wild Tim and the Widder.
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Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
I surely loved it. The talk and spelling all fits so well and the art is exquisitely mirroring your first description of him. Yes, it takes a 'Widder lady' sometimes, the type you describe, to tame the animal in some men.
You did it well.
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I surely loved it. The talk and spelling all fits so well and the art is exquisitely mirroring your first description of him. Yes, it takes a 'Widder lady' sometimes, the type you describe, to tame the animal in some men.
You did it well.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I love the way you put this together and basically the whole story line. You did a great job on the language of the west. Great rhyming and a fun read
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I love the way you put this together and basically the whole story line. You did a great job on the language of the west. Great rhyming and a fun read
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Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
I love this poem! You do so well writing western poems. I hope you have more to post! I can read this aloud in my southern accent and it sounds like me. So much fun! Well done!
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I love this poem! You do so well writing western poems. I hope you have more to post! I can read this aloud in my southern accent and it sounds like me. So much fun! Well done!
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
Comment from beizanten
An intriguing title. A simple yet pretty good first stanza. A pretty good second stanza. What is odder, a good third stanza. A pretty good description of feature. Nothing change people like true love does
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An intriguing title. A simple yet pretty good first stanza. A pretty good second stanza. What is odder, a good third stanza. A pretty good description of feature. Nothing change people like true love does
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Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Wow Willie this is a great write! I loved the language you used to give your poem some authenticity and the story is very pleasing too, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Wow Willie this is a great write! I loved the language you used to give your poem some authenticity and the story is very pleasing too, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020