Reviews from

Revelation Reveals

...in ABC order

35 total reviews 
Comment from Susan Larson
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Well, you certainly covered all we need to know - and follow - from A to Z! As I started to red it, I wondered how you were going to deal with X. Funny, Xerox! What a quaint, almost antiquated word! I love how you worked that in.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
    Susan
    Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Stay safe and well...

    Blessings...Portia
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
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When I had issues with God I hated those who pushed it down my throat. I loved the "L" line. That is the perfect advice to anyone who is trying to show them God. Be an example, shine your light, be sincere, all of it. Maybe ever love them a little more than you might have otherwise. There are so many ways to show God to someone without being preachy. I loved it. Time will tell what the future holds.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
    I totally agree with you, know one should ever push their belief on another. Christ lives in you and people can see Christ in you without opening your mouth. Thanks so much for your review and very wise comments, they are greatly appreciated.

    Blessings...Portia
Comment from RShipp
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Wow! An acrostic completed successfully.
An A-Z acrostic, no less!
Add that to your acrostic now also rhymes.... a feat magnificently done!

Enjoyed the read.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
    RShipp,

    Thanks so much for such and outstanding review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. God gets all the Glory!

    Blessings...Portia
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Exceptional
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This is a sixer if I've ever read one. This abecedarian poem is superb in every respect! First of all, it conveys Biblical truths in a fervent manner and witnesses to those who are not saved. It is skillfully, creatively composed with rhyme and meter and specific details. GREAT!!

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
    Janice,
    Thanks so much for such an outstanding review, very kind comments and six star rating, they are greatly appreciated. God gets all the Glory! Stay well and safe my friend...

    Blessings..Portia








Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem aboutbthe book Revelation that reveals Christ's second coming is near. It us our last chance to repent and cleanse ourselves from sin. Not everyone gets a last hour chance.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
    Sandra,

    Thanks so much for your review and very wise comments, they are greatly appreciated. Stay safe and well...

    Blessings...Portia
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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This is a fabulous acrostic poem, Portia, and it wasn't till I was nearly at the end that I realised it was one. So very neatly, and perfectly done. Your words are powerful, and as we head towards Easter, the anniversary of our Savour's death, your poem gives us a warning, we would be foolish to ignore. Well done! :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
    Sandra,
    Thanks so much for such an outstanding review, and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated.

    Blessings...Portia
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
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Hello Portia, this is a very well written ABC poem in true form. You show clearly in good rhyme your faith in God - it shines on every page. I hope the end is not near - not yet. Very honest write and well displayed. Take care and stay safe. Regards Dorothy xx

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
    Dorothy,
    Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, I totally agree with you, I pray that the end is not near. Stay safe and well!!
    Hugs...Portia
Comment from Kermit R. Mullins
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"Lead by example", "be sincere" this is the best advice, thanks. I've tried this style of writing once, years ago. Mine...not so good. You've done a fantastic job. I believe I will try it again. Best wishes. Have a wonderful life.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
    Kermit,

    Thanks you kindly for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated.
    Stay sage and well...

    Blessings...Portia
Comment from lyenochka
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Each line is a like a word of godly instruction like a proverb. Well done! My favorites were the last six lines.

Comments:
"Lead my example - let your light shine...be sincere" (maybe Lead by example?)
"Quench, not the spirit, " (no comma after Quench because that's the verb for the following words)

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
    Helen,

    Thanks so much for your review, comments and support. I can never catch my errors, I made the corrections and I appreciate all that you do. Thanks for the six star rating

    Lots of love...Portia
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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What an awesome poem, pharp. You did an excellent job with your abc-z poem. The presentation is super. I love the image, the color scheme, and your excellent word choices. This is the best one of these I have seen in a long time. You should be very proud of this poem. Thanks for sharing this beautiful presentation. Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
    Jan,

    Thank you kindly for your review, and very kind comments they are greatly appreciated. Your kindness and support means a lot to me.

    Lots of love...Portia