Whispers . . .
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Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
An apt description of Fog. It quietly wraps itself around everything so that you cannot see where you're going. It rolls over everything and hushes the atmosphere. Good presentation.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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An apt description of Fog. It quietly wraps itself around everything so that you cannot see where you're going. It rolls over everything and hushes the atmosphere. Good presentation.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Thank you. I'm so glad you like it.
Comment from lyenochka
Loved this, Yvonne! Yours and Carl Sandburg's poem about fog "on little cat feet" are probably my two favorite poems on fog! Thanks for sharing it here, too!
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Loved this, Yvonne! Yours and Carl Sandburg's poem about fog "on little cat feet" are probably my two favorite poems on fog! Thanks for sharing it here, too!
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Thank you for saying that. What a compliment.
Comment from Carl DeVere
This is very nice and well worded. It could also refer to thoughts which are often foggy and falling into clefts (great word selection) and crannies. Good accompanying graphic as well. Well done.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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This is very nice and well worded. It could also refer to thoughts which are often foggy and falling into clefts (great word selection) and crannies. Good accompanying graphic as well. Well done.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Thank you. I'm glad you like it.
Comment from giovannimariatommaso
This poem conjures up a great visual feeling and image of fog using precise words for each action of fog as if it had the intelligence of a great and mysterious mind. giovanni
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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This poem conjures up a great visual feeling and image of fog using precise words for each action of fog as if it had the intelligence of a great and mysterious mind. giovanni
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Thank you for a wonderful review. Very much appreciated.
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You're Welcome. giovanni
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Yvonne. While reading the poem, I wondered what I was listening to. It turns out I was listening to fog. That is an excellent metaphor as well as a perfect description of how fog lives and where it goes. It's a very interesting poem.
Robert
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Hello Yvonne. While reading the poem, I wondered what I was listening to. It turns out I was listening to fog. That is an excellent metaphor as well as a perfect description of how fog lives and where it goes. It's a very interesting poem.
Robert
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Thank you. I'm so glad you think so.
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you're welcome
Comment from A Little Bird
Love the mystery and fantasy elements of this piece. I love fog; except when I'm on top of a mountain after a hike and really wanted to see the view below! Hope you went well with the assignment, though I'm sure you did!
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Love the mystery and fantasy elements of this piece. I love fog; except when I'm on top of a mountain after a hike and really wanted to see the view below! Hope you went well with the assignment, though I'm sure you did!
Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Thank you for this lovely review! I love fog, too, and it's so good to find someone who does.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation.
-I like your poem
very much.
-It flows well with
effective imagery and
alliteration. I am guessing
that was part of the assignment.
-I really like the verse with
"Ethereal, yet bold..." and
the ending is excellent, too.
-Good job with the poem.
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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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-Nice image and
presentation.
-I like your poem
very much.
-It flows well with
effective imagery and
alliteration. I am guessing
that was part of the assignment.
-I really like the verse with
"Ethereal, yet bold..." and
the ending is excellent, too.
-Good job with the poem.
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Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Thank you. We had to use rhyme and rhythm. I need to put that in my notes. I'm so glad you like it.
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You are very welcome. I also thought it might have had to be about a thing described like a person. I give you an A+ for the assignment!
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Ooooo, an A+. Thank you so much for that.
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You are very welcome and deserving. You can report it to Jim and the class that you have it on a well respected authority:)
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I certainly will do that. 8-)
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😊
Comment from BeasPeas
This is very nice, Yvonne. Your free verse is a good description of fog. It's mysterious and stealthy as it wends its way through every cleft and cranny. Marilyn
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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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This is very nice, Yvonne. Your free verse is a good description of fog. It's mysterious and stealthy as it wends its way through every cleft and cranny. Marilyn
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Comment Written 22-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Thank you. I'm glad you like it. Appreciate it.