Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Hi Mark. I really liked your verse and the use of the descriptive...sun and wind etch leathered lines in ..face.... that was superb... but the artwork just detracts from the vivid image your words evoke... Just an observation.

Melissa

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 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019

M

Touché! I like mkflood images and was too lazy to seek a more appropriate one from the Internet. The ones seen on FanArt did not reflect my text. My guess is the picture may pique members to review this post. Let's see how the early returns come in. I can always change it if I want to pump its future visibility.

M

reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019

I changed my picture. I was blowing in the wind with my comedic approach, which I consistently can't do successfully. Now the illustration matches the verse more accurately.

reply by Sugarray77 on 15-Apr-2019

Great, I am going to look at it again.

M

reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019

P.S. I am saving that original one for a comedic verse. When I earn enough two-bits or pesos, I will release it from preview status.

reply by Sugarray77 on 15-Apr-2019

Haha... good idea!