The Murder
A tale of murder22 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
What a wonderful thriller as you have left the ending " that two of me were there that day" leaving many questions, psychotic break, twins, or other? an excellent read very well written****kahpot
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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2018
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What a wonderful thriller as you have left the ending " that two of me were there that day" leaving many questions, psychotic break, twins, or other? an excellent read very well written****kahpot
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Comment Written 02-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2018
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Thank you kahpot for such a nice review
Comment from bob cullen
That's clever. I was trying to work out where you were going with this poem. Well told. The rhyme was good and the story moved along at a good pace. Guess the good thing about being schizo is you always have someone to talk to.
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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2018
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That's clever. I was trying to work out where you were going with this poem. Well told. The rhyme was good and the story moved along at a good pace. Guess the good thing about being schizo is you always have someone to talk to.
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Comment Written 02-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2018
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Second time today that you made me laugh out loud Bob. Thank you for the excellent review