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He's not choosy about what he paints.
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Comment from
Douglas Paul
Just delightful, my friend. Your meter is perfect and the story flows smoothly. So glad to see Wally back in action. He is my favorite weasel of all time
Comment Written 15-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2016
Awwww, thank you. He's glad to be back. He'll have lots to tell us. LOL.
Comment from
Barb Hensongispsaca
LOL is this going to be a series?
I loved the words and I could picture in my mind him standing up front with all the little ones sitting around watching as he painted and explained the colors.
A great childrens rhyming piece and for me too.lol
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Comment Written 15-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2016
Eeeek. I forgot to add it to my book. Excuse me while I do that. Thanks for the great review. 8-)
I did it. Yes, it's a series. I hope you'll like them. Thank you again for your review. 8-)
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