That Damn Man on the Moon
Short Story-What Is This Contest Entry25 total reviews
Comment from Susanjohn
Could not stop reading..even though topic matter is difficult for me...I like the twist and turns in this...and thank God!! for that great ending!!! nice job Michael.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016
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Could not stop reading..even though topic matter is difficult for me...I like the twist and turns in this...and thank God!! for that great ending!!! nice job Michael.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016
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Great input. Appreciate the encouragement.No way I let that fool off! Thanks so much. mikey
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written story. Although I believe this is total fictional. These type of thing happens in real life. The truth always come to light even if it is many years later.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016
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A very well-written story. Although I believe this is total fictional. These type of thing happens in real life. The truth always come to light even if it is many years later.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016
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Great input. Appreciate the encouragement. Thanks so much. mikey
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is a very strong contest entry. It has everything strong characters, plot, conflict, and solution. Great job. Good luck with the contest.
We need five point restraints her. (here????)
My daddy fucked my every time I fucked up ... beat me too ( me not my???)
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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016
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This is a very strong contest entry. It has everything strong characters, plot, conflict, and solution. Great job. Good luck with the contest.
We need five point restraints her. (here????)
My daddy fucked my every time I fucked up ... beat me too ( me not my???)
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016
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Great input. Appreciate the encouragement. Thanks so much. mikey
Comment from Liberty Justice
WOW! Indeed, this is a drama-filled story composed of intrigue and criminal suspicions built around a famous astronaut and his son. Detailed conflicts and conversations of intense pleas and dramatic episodes. SIX STARS. WELL DONE! liberty justice
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016
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WOW! Indeed, this is a drama-filled story composed of intrigue and criminal suspicions built around a famous astronaut and his son. Detailed conflicts and conversations of intense pleas and dramatic episodes. SIX STARS. WELL DONE! liberty justice
Comment Written 19-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016
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Great input. Appreciate the encouragement. Thanks so much. mikey
Comment from nordicgirl
Wow. I guess I should not be surprised, but actually I am. This is so smooth and entertaining. The best story you have written. A very satisfying ending and read. Professional, I would say. Your growth is clear. NG
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016
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Wow. I guess I should not be surprised, but actually I am. This is so smooth and entertaining. The best story you have written. A very satisfying ending and read. Professional, I would say. Your growth is clear. NG
Comment Written 19-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016
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Great input. Appreciate the encouragement. Thanks so much. mikey