A Book of Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 36 "Your Touch"Assorted poems of love
29 total reviews
Comment from Glasstruth
Very up lifting, as it shows that people need people. Without that, what do we have? Our gadgets are people oriented. A touch is something you'll never have from a computer. Well crafted. Les
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
  |
Very up lifting, as it shows that people need people. Without that, what do we have? Our gadgets are people oriented. A touch is something you'll never have from a computer. Well crafted. Les
Comment Written 08-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
-
Thanks, Les. I agree with you about needing touch in our lives. Thanks for using your time to read and leave this wonderful review of my work. :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Your Touch
by justafan
Beautiful poem about the spiritual connection you have with God. I think you did a very good job with this poem. Well done!
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
|
Your Touch
by justafan
Beautiful poem about the spiritual connection you have with God. I think you did a very good job with this poem. Well done!
Comment Written 08-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
-
Thanks GBR. Not exactly the touch I was referring too but HEY...if it works :). Always appreciate your feedback hon.
Always,
Missy
-
LOL I wasn't sure but the picture looked like God's hand.
-
I think I added my voice reading it...will u see if you can see and hear it? please!
-
Okay, the first time I didn't hear it. How do you record your own voice? That is neat. It makes more sense with the sound of your voice, is very nice. :) Good job!
-
I used my phone to record then saved in dropbox on the pc and uploaded from the Advanced Editor setting in FanStory...:)
-
Thank you :)
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hey, it could happen, and it's not beyond the realm of possibilities. That two people could love each other s-o-o-o-o-o-o much that a mere touch from them makes everything seem alright is a beautiful thought, Missy.
I like to think (believe?) there is love like that out in the world, I truly do. One day, I might even be lucky enough to experience myself, who knows?
A well written, uplifting little verse. But, is it fact, or fiction? Does love this strong, this...powerful truly exist?
I like to think so...
Good work. ~Dean ;|
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
|
Hey, it could happen, and it's not beyond the realm of possibilities. That two people could love each other s-o-o-o-o-o-o much that a mere touch from them makes everything seem alright is a beautiful thought, Missy.
I like to think (believe?) there is love like that out in the world, I truly do. One day, I might even be lucky enough to experience myself, who knows?
A well written, uplifting little verse. But, is it fact, or fiction? Does love this strong, this...powerful truly exist?
I like to think so...
Good work. ~Dean ;|
Comment Written 08-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
-
Now now Dean, surely your not that far gone to the dark side that your can't let a lil sunshine in once in awhile...lol. I believe you will find it. In my heart of hearts, I believe that.
Thanks for the sweet review, my friend.
Always,
Missy
-
You're welcome as always, Missy. ;}
Comment from Janet Foor
This is a such a timely poem for me. I can relate to each line from the first to the last. Beautiful artwork to enhance the lovely piece. I wish I had another six for this review.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
|
This is a such a timely poem for me. I can relate to each line from the first to the last. Beautiful artwork to enhance the lovely piece. I wish I had another six for this review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 08-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
-
Your enjoyment is all the 6 I need Janet :). Thanks a bunch hon.
Always,
Missy
Comment from rjuselius
I can relate having met my soul mate dear justafan! Everything he does is truly amazing how he is aware of what I desire or need.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
|
I can relate having met my soul mate dear justafan! Everything he does is truly amazing how he is aware of what I desire or need.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 08-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
-
I am feeling blessed that you enjoyed this Rebekka. Thank you, for the kind review :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from Pantygynt
Free style but with the feel that it is looking for a rhythm that it never quite finds. The rhyme however seems at first to be more successful. Near rhyme in the first couplet, assonance in the second (some would count this as full rhyme). Full rhyme in the third and nothing in the last. It's an odd format. It seems to me that this either needs less rhyme and shorter lines to make it free verse or more, to end on a rhyming couplet. I'm not quite sure what category you intend it to be in.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
|
Free style but with the feel that it is looking for a rhythm that it never quite finds. The rhyme however seems at first to be more successful. Near rhyme in the first couplet, assonance in the second (some would count this as full rhyme). Full rhyme in the third and nothing in the last. It's an odd format. It seems to me that this either needs less rhyme and shorter lines to make it free verse or more, to end on a rhyming couplet. I'm not quite sure what category you intend it to be in.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
-
I honestly have no idea either...it just came out :) Thank you anyway for the review :) always appreciate feedback.
Always,
Missy
Comment from Jay Squires
Missy, you are a "dyed in the wool" romantic, aren't you? There is something enduring about the Romantic Traditionalist. She doesn't go in for the sexual "kill", but but stays ever out where the whisps and mists are, where there is still the importance of a touch and a hug to bring rightness to what appears as an all wrong universe.
Thanks for sharing, Missy.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
|
Missy, you are a "dyed in the wool" romantic, aren't you? There is something enduring about the Romantic Traditionalist. She doesn't go in for the sexual "kill", but but stays ever out where the whisps and mists are, where there is still the importance of a touch and a hug to bring rightness to what appears as an all wrong universe.
Thanks for sharing, Missy.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
-
Just call me "ol Wolly" lol. I love how you can peek right in and see me. Thank you, Jay for this lovely, lovely review.
Always,
Missy
-
My pleasure, Missy.
Comment from lightink
This is such a sweet description of secure attachment! There are actually MRI studies showing that the pain center of the brain actually gets less active (as a result of pain stimuli) when we hold our partner's hand if we are securely attached.
Sorry for going all nerdy about this :).
For me this poem is about that, just put in a much more romantic way.
Thank you for sharing!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
|
This is such a sweet description of secure attachment! There are actually MRI studies showing that the pain center of the brain actually gets less active (as a result of pain stimuli) when we hold our partner's hand if we are securely attached.
Sorry for going all nerdy about this :).
For me this poem is about that, just put in a much more romantic way.
Thank you for sharing!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
-
No, don't apologize. I love how it stirred your mind hon. Made you think of the science of touch :) Thank you, so very much for this review. Know that I am smiling now.
Always,
Missy
-
:)
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is lovely and so inspiring! You are becoming one fine poet, my friend. You express the internal calm experienced by a freely given touch with love beautifully in this well penned piece. Nicely done and I thank you very much for sharing it.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
|
This is lovely and so inspiring! You are becoming one fine poet, my friend. You express the internal calm experienced by a freely given touch with love beautifully in this well penned piece. Nicely done and I thank you very much for sharing it.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2015
-
Thank you sweetie...I see a picture and something just clicks :). Your opinion matters a great deal to me because I admire your work so much. xx
Always,
Missy
-
You did a great job with this one .... you are blooming into a rose of poetry right before my eyes and it is a pleasure to watch.
-
Big hug!
-
I wish I knew how to read it and send the audio of it with music in the background.
-
If you have a microphone you can record a file and then use the Advanced options to attach it.
-
I am trying :)
-
Are you using the 'Sound Recorder' from the Accessories program group? I have a plug and play mike I use for lectures which has better sound quality but the one in Windows works pretty good for this purpose.
-
No...but I will look in the programs now :)