Comment from
sweetwoodjax
this is a beautiful poem, tfawcus, you shared a beautiful story of the boy who sat with the Sikh each day and learned lessons from him. I enjoyed reading it...
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Comment Written 26-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015
Thank you so much sweetwoodjax. Glad you enjoyed it! Tony
Comment from
BeasPeas
Tony, this is quite amazing. I enjoyed every word of your splendid blank verse poem. Descriptions flow on and on. Impossible to choose a line better than another. Beautifully done. Marilyn/BeasPeas
Comment Written 26-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015
Thanks for your star-studded review, Marilyn. So glad you enjoyed this little Caribbean adventure! Tony
reply by BeasPeas on 26-Jul-2015