Love draws themes.
Some opposites don't attract.83 total reviews
Comment from MissMerri
I thought this was an excellent response to this most unusual prompt, Roy. While many people used the opposites of Love and Hate, you did it in a way that was deep and truthful, and inserted rhymes also, with dreams/schemes. Very nicely done in every way. I really like this.
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I thought this was an excellent response to this most unusual prompt, Roy. While many people used the opposites of Love and Hate, you did it in a way that was deep and truthful, and inserted rhymes also, with dreams/schemes. Very nicely done in every way. I really like this.
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Thanks so much Adonna, for the delightful review and comments, and excellent rating blessings, Roy.
Comment from c_lucas
There is a fine line between love and hate. It can be crossed at any time. This is well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. Good luck in your contest.
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There is a fine line between love and hate. It can be crossed at any time. This is well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 08-May-2015
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Thanks so much Charlie, for the delightful review and comments, and excellent rating blessings, Roy.
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You're welcome, Roy, Charlie
Comment from costellsgirl33
I don't agree with opposites attract! Ha, they may attract but they don't stay together! lol.
I think it's better to be suited to someone or some thing that's more like you. Otherwise they'll just be a lot or compromises and unhappiness just to make the other person or thing happy! That is no way to live.
Some may not agree with me, but that's what I think.
Very nice poem and good luck in the contest
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I don't agree with opposites attract! Ha, they may attract but they don't stay together! lol.
I think it's better to be suited to someone or some thing that's more like you. Otherwise they'll just be a lot or compromises and unhappiness just to make the other person or thing happy! That is no way to live.
Some may not agree with me, but that's what I think.
Very nice poem and good luck in the contest
Comment Written 08-May-2015
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Thanks so much for the delightful review and comments, and excellent rating blessings, Roy.
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Roy,
It is always a pleasure. Have a great day!
Arnetta
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Roy,
It is always a pleasure. Have a great day!
Arnetta
Comment from CR Delport
Love and hate goes so close together, and often love an result in hate, which is actually quite sad. This is very well done. Good luck.
Take care.
Christelle.
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Love and hate goes so close together, and often love an result in hate, which is actually quite sad. This is very well done. Good luck.
Take care.
Christelle.
Comment Written 08-May-2015
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Thanks so much Christelle, for the delightful review and comments, and excellent rating blessings, Roy.
Comment from Chris Tee
This Antonym Poem is so well worked out and and it is an excellent entry in the contest, Well done indeed Roy and good luck in the contest.
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This Antonym Poem is so well worked out and and it is an excellent entry in the contest, Well done indeed Roy and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-May-2015
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Thanks so much Chris, for the delightful review and comments, and excellent rating blessings, Roy.
Comment from ElPoetry001
Time
Always on the mind, too much or too little
Active work or just being bored
Death
A very interest exercise, making us realize the many distinctions and nuances we can use in writing. Also, a fun experience.
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Time
Always on the mind, too much or too little
Active work or just being bored
Death
A very interest exercise, making us realize the many distinctions and nuances we can use in writing. Also, a fun experience.
Comment Written 08-May-2015
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Thanks so much for the exceptional review, comments and rating, and the lovely stars, and the great antonym, blessings, Roy.
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Comment from robina1978
Nice picture that complements your poem very well. It is an Antonym poem alright. I had never heard of this form. You stuck to all the rules. Love and hate are opposite things. Best wishes for the prompt.
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Nice picture that complements your poem very well. It is an Antonym poem alright. I had never heard of this form. You stuck to all the rules. Love and hate are opposite things. Best wishes for the prompt.
Comment Written 08-May-2015
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Thanks so much for the delightful review and comments, and excellent rating blessings, Roy.
Comment from Pantygynt
Short, sweet, to the point and follows the instructions to the letter. What more need be said? Only enough to let FS accept this review. Very well written.
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Short, sweet, to the point and follows the instructions to the letter. What more need be said? Only enough to let FS accept this review. Very well written.
Comment Written 08-May-2015
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Thanks so much for the delightful review and comments, and excellent rating blessings, Roy.
Comment from al1801
Good antonym and choice - a nice illustration to enhance the poem - something there to break the heart. Technically and literally right on.
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Good antonym and choice - a nice illustration to enhance the poem - something there to break the heart. Technically and literally right on.
Comment Written 08-May-2015
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Thanks so much for the outstanding review and comments, and for the exceptional rating and stars.
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Pleasure, well done
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Love draws themes", is well-written and thought-provoking piece. Short, succinct and very much to the point. It was a pleasure to review a work of this calibre.
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"Love draws themes", is well-written and thought-provoking piece. Short, succinct and very much to the point. It was a pleasure to review a work of this calibre.
Comment Written 08-May-2015
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Thanks Duchess, for the wonderful review and encouraging comments,
Roy, you're more than welcome.
Blessings the Duches