Comment from Liilia

Exceptional

Now there's a poem that's a 'corker'. Love the use of 'vernacular' and the wonderful humor throughout. It flows nicely and each line is to the point and colorful, to say the least. The message is oh, so true, too. It gives perspective on what money really does - which all depends on what you've been doing before, your pattern of life. Chances are money won't change those ingrained patterns. Anyway, Amber went off to the beyond feeling little (if any) pain. Thanks for sharing and thanks for using my photo, too.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2015

Thank you, Liilia, for a terrific review. Bill

Comment from Megalips

Good

Probably more valid story than we would like to admit, but pretty funny in a cynical sort of way. I'm not sure about this "Dom a magnum of the PArigonon"....I know the champagne, but that seems confusing

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 Comment Written 22-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2015

The site doesn't transfer nonstandard text well (this had an accent mark). I've retyped Perignon (a brand of champagne, Dom Perignon). This is all assuming that was the problem.

reply by Megalips on 22-Apr-2015

I got you...yes, I've had problems with transfers myself.