Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Yes hummingbirds are amazing little bundles of strength and endurance. I enjoyed your poem. It does make one wonder how they are able to do what they do.

Good job presenting some info in your poem.

I see nothing to change.

Good job and thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 15-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2015

jannypan, thank you for stopping by to read and review my work. I am thrilled you enjoyed this poem...jlsavell

Comment from Sis Cat

Excellent

An excellent poem capped by a profound question. If a hummingbird is not an example of determination, I do not know what is. You describe well the possibility of the impossible and turn the question to us. Thank you very much for this brilliant poem. It refreshed me.

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 Comment Written 15-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2015

Sis Cat, hello again. How are you? thank you very much once again for stopping by to read and review my work. Jimi

reply by Sis Cat on 15-Apr-2015

Jimi:

I am quite fine. I look forward to reading "The Open Door: 100 Years, 100 Poems of Poetry Magazine." Cheers and thank you for your poem.