Loving life
Quatrains philosophy poem22 total reviews
Comment from alphonsus murgatroyd
A lovely, life-affirming piece. The art work is also very appropriate.
Comment - in the middle verse the line 'Not to be considered unsurpassed' is confusing because it is a double negative. The intended meaning is, I'm guessing, something like 'Not to be overlooked' or 'Not to be considered unworthy'. Needs clarifying.
Otherwise, a positive and cheerful statement about self-worth.
Cheers AM
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2014
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A lovely, life-affirming piece. The art work is also very appropriate.
Comment - in the middle verse the line 'Not to be considered unsurpassed' is confusing because it is a double negative. The intended meaning is, I'm guessing, something like 'Not to be overlooked' or 'Not to be considered unworthy'. Needs clarifying.
Otherwise, a positive and cheerful statement about self-worth.
Cheers AM
Comment Written 16-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2014
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Thanks for the great review, and yes I see the double negative. I must do something about it, Thank you. Mary
Comment from dmt1967
This is a lovely poem. I liked the way it flowed and sounded when I read it aloud and I love the delicate pink background. Thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2014
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This is a lovely poem. I liked the way it flowed and sounded when I read it aloud and I love the delicate pink background. Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 16-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2014
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Thanks for a very encouraging review I appreciate it. Mary