Reign Knee Daze (Rainy Days)
A poem, just for the hell of it...127 total reviews
Comment from RGstar
Humor and horror. Well presented, Dean. Though long it held its grace. Good rhymes and lyrically sound. A few little grammar dots, but nothing I would care to mention that you do not already know, at least not enough to to detract from the work.
Your usual visuals well inserted. A lot of work gone into this.
Another good write.
Best wishes,
RGstar
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Humor and horror. Well presented, Dean. Though long it held its grace. Good rhymes and lyrically sound. A few little grammar dots, but nothing I would care to mention that you do not already know, at least not enough to to detract from the work.
Your usual visuals well inserted. A lot of work gone into this.
Another good write.
Best wishes,
RGstar
Comment Written 12-Nov-2014
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Dean, here you are scaring me half to death when I just crawled away from it. Ok my friend once more you prove your imagery almost drips with fear and screams on its own. Such impact, but goodness if I have nightmares I'm coming after you! OMG those picture/vids like wow, let me hide under the covers.
Great king of screams I see is still in fine form.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2014
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Dear Dean, here you are scaring me half to death when I just crawled away from it. Ok my friend once more you prove your imagery almost drips with fear and screams on its own. Such impact, but goodness if I have nightmares I'm coming after you! OMG those picture/vids like wow, let me hide under the covers.
Great king of screams I see is still in fine form.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 12-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2014
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Maureen! Is it really you!? How wonderful you are to take the time to read and review this for me. Praise be, how I've missed you around here, dear poet! I'm so glad you are getting stronger, and I know you will recover with the spirit of the celtic Warrior we all know you to be.
God bless you, my dear friend, and welcome back!
Respectfully,
Dean
Comment from butterfly4265
It's very comforting to know that others have dreams as crazy and bizarre as my own! I loved this from start to finish, not knowing what to expect along the way. Loved the "motion artwork". Very creepy but reassuring at the end. Excellent piece which was very much enjoyed. Thank you for sharing and hope your dreams continue to inspire you!
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2014
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It's very comforting to know that others have dreams as crazy and bizarre as my own! I loved this from start to finish, not knowing what to expect along the way. Loved the "motion artwork". Very creepy but reassuring at the end. Excellent piece which was very much enjoyed. Thank you for sharing and hope your dreams continue to inspire you!
Comment Written 12-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2014
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Thanks so much for the excellent feedback, butterfly4265. It's much appreciated. :}
Comment from sibhus
Wow, what a tour-de-force there, Dean. Great rhymes that not only speak of the temptation of Satan, but also make such accute observations of the human condition. A really good poem. And always excellent presentation with your videos to enhance the poem.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2014
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Wow, what a tour-de-force there, Dean. Great rhymes that not only speak of the temptation of Satan, but also make such accute observations of the human condition. A really good poem. And always excellent presentation with your videos to enhance the poem.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2014
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Thanks a bunch for your excellent feedback, sibhus. As always, I sincerely appreciate it. :}
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
Jeepers creepers! This is amazing in form and construction. Medications can certainly influence dream patterns, but when it inspires such a write maybe increasing the dosage is the better way to go LOL. Nicely done and I thank you so much for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2014
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Jeepers creepers! This is amazing in form and construction. Medications can certainly influence dream patterns, but when it inspires such a write maybe increasing the dosage is the better way to go LOL. Nicely done and I thank you so much for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2014
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Thank you for reading it, Monica. Much appreciated. :}
Comment from flylikeaneagle
God is amazing! Rain on the hope and joy of the Lord! Great photos and rain. God deserves the awards on this. Great message for the nations and leaders. I like the gave you all, no, lies. Jesus gives us gifts. You wrote this very well! God bless! <>< Soli deo Gloria!
flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2014
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God is amazing! Rain on the hope and joy of the Lord! Great photos and rain. God deserves the awards on this. Great message for the nations and leaders. I like the gave you all, no, lies. Jesus gives us gifts. You wrote this very well! God bless! <>< Soli deo Gloria!
flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 12-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2014
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Thanks, flylikeaneagle. I'm so happy you enjoyed my meager offering, an attempt at telling stories in rhyme.
Much appreciated. :}
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem is well rhymed and metered. It has many apt illunstrations. It shows how faith can keep you from falling in the evil. It washes away doubt and fear.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2014
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This poem is well rhymed and metered. It has many apt illunstrations. It shows how faith can keep you from falling in the evil. It washes away doubt and fear.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 12-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2014
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Thanks, dragonpoet. I'll will...
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No problem.
dragonpoet
Comment from Marisa3
All I can say is what a gift you have.
If this is what your unconscious mind unleashes when you sleep, then buddy I would definitely not ask for new meds! The ones you're on are working just fine.
Extraordinary Poem! Loved the artwork!
Note: Not used to getting sound effects with a post, so initially thought my computer was being fried! Scared the hell out of me ... appropriate response, I think, considering, the 'theme' of this poem. :=)
Marisa
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All I can say is what a gift you have.
If this is what your unconscious mind unleashes when you sleep, then buddy I would definitely not ask for new meds! The ones you're on are working just fine.
Extraordinary Poem! Loved the artwork!
Note: Not used to getting sound effects with a post, so initially thought my computer was being fried! Scared the hell out of me ... appropriate response, I think, considering, the 'theme' of this poem. :=)
Marisa
Comment Written 12-Nov-2014
Comment from Hareem.S
This is a beautiful poem I must say. You have described your dream in a vivid manner and the images used are very appropriate. I liked the lyrical cadence of the poem.
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This is a beautiful poem I must say. You have described your dream in a vivid manner and the images used are very appropriate. I liked the lyrical cadence of the poem.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2014
Comment from Green Lake Girl
That must've been some dream you had. I love the sound of the cleansing rain you've incorporated into this poem. Interesting concept to be able to know who's sold their soul to the devil.
Am curious; is the ghoul in the fourth animated photo churning butter?? I won't even mention what else came to mind.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2014
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That must've been some dream you had. I love the sound of the cleansing rain you've incorporated into this poem. Interesting concept to be able to know who's sold their soul to the devil.
Am curious; is the ghoul in the fourth animated photo churning butter?? I won't even mention what else came to mind.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2014
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Uh, I'm not too sure what he's doing, GLG, but I thought the same thing when I first saw it. So, my safest answer to you would be, "Why yes, Green lake Girl...he's churning the butter of bitterness." LOL...
Thanks for your comments.
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The butter of bitterness. Love it!