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haiku (October frost)

contest entry - haiku

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Comment from lakeport
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October frost, indeed that's a very nice expessed Haiku poem, Good luck at the contest, I enjoyed reading it,God bless you,Lakeport,

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014
    Thank you, Lakeport
reply by lakeport on 18-Oct-2014
    you are welcome.lakeport.
Comment from webfoot
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grinning vegetables - this is a good choice and really brings home the feeling in the air right now, with the coming once more of winter.

a very appropriate haiku

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 Comment Written 18-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014
    Thank you for the lovely review.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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Hi,

Well, the pumpkin finishes what you started with this poem. Fun haiku. Good presentation.

Best of luck in the contest.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax


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 Comment Written 18-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014
    Thank you, Jax.