haiku (October frost)
contest entry - haiku23 total reviews
Comment from lakeport
October frost, indeed that's a very nice expessed Haiku poem, Good luck at the contest, I enjoyed reading it,God bless you,Lakeport,
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014
October frost, indeed that's a very nice expessed Haiku poem, Good luck at the contest, I enjoyed reading it,God bless you,Lakeport,
Comment Written 18-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014
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Thank you, Lakeport
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you are welcome.lakeport.
Comment from webfoot
grinning vegetables - this is a good choice and really brings home the feeling in the air right now, with the coming once more of winter.
a very appropriate haiku
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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014
grinning vegetables - this is a good choice and really brings home the feeling in the air right now, with the coming once more of winter.
a very appropriate haiku
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Comment Written 18-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014
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Thank you for the lovely review.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi,
Well, the pumpkin finishes what you started with this poem. Fun haiku. Good presentation.
Best of luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax
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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014
Hi,
Well, the pumpkin finishes what you started with this poem. Fun haiku. Good presentation.
Best of luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax
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Comment Written 18-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014
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Thank you, Jax.