The Caretaker
Watching a saint. ( in five lines; a Gogyoshi)24 total reviews
Comment from Jackreese
Very true words. I watch my Aunt take care of my ailing 90 year old grandfather. She is tired, not a spring chicken and has her own health problems, yet she keeps on trucking without a complaint.
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Very true words. I watch my Aunt take care of my ailing 90 year old grandfather. She is tired, not a spring chicken and has her own health problems, yet she keeps on trucking without a complaint.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2014
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Oh...I can just see her...Bless you all.
Comment from mauial
My wife and I can totally relate to this as we have been the primary caregiver for my mother for the las 8.5 years. It can wear on you. Prayer indeed is necessary.
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My wife and I can totally relate to this as we have been the primary caregiver for my mother for the las 8.5 years. It can wear on you. Prayer indeed is necessary.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2014
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God bless you and give you strength and joy.
Comment from kiwijenny
Precious unsung heroes....with no time for themselves...
It is a hard thing..families must bind together and not to leave it to one. Share the care,..well penned poem for alerting us
God bless
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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2014
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Precious unsung heroes....with no time for themselves...
It is a hard thing..families must bind together and not to leave it to one. Share the care,..well penned poem for alerting us
God bless
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Comment Written 08-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2014
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Bless you dear friend...Thank you for the positivity. Hug
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your poem is true for caretakers. I like the way you described the caretaker. I know many would 'dump onions and beans into her soup.' Ok, that is not a direct quote, but close enough. I would change nothing. Good job ad good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2014
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Your poem is true for caretakers. I like the way you described the caretaker. I know many would 'dump onions and beans into her soup.' Ok, that is not a direct quote, but close enough. I would change nothing. Good job ad good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 08-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2014
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Thank you for TRULY getting it. Bless you.