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'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway
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Comment from
djsaxon
A stunning choice of pic accompanied by a sensitive, evocative write. I sometimes think of lost friends and lovers past. I guess that is the way of things. nicely penned. Cheers - DJ
Comment Written 17-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2014
Thanks DJ for this great review. :-) Carolyn
Comment from
Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi Carolyn,
I think you captured her exceptionally well. Love the poem you created around it her image. Well done!
Good luck in the contest.
Cheers * Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax
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Comment Written 17-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2014
And a 'heap of smiles' back to you Jax. Thanks for this great review and best wishes. :-) Carolyn
Comment from
Sonaleeka
Lot of intensity is there in poem and artwork.I loved the artwork with your wordings.It's like magic while reading.
God bless!
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Comment Written 17-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2014
Thanks Sonaleeka, glad you enjoyed 'Longing for you.' :-) Carolyn
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