The Flower
Don't make pormises...31 total reviews
Comment from Dean Kuch
A little romp in the rump is never a bad thing as long as you have a willing partner. And in my case, as long as it's a female.
She may have enjoyed herself once the initial shock wore off. But bully for Grace's loving hubby to realize that it really wasn't what she'd wanted at all. She could have even turned the tables on Jason if she'd been a bit bolder. Even a man's G-spot is up inside his derriere. As he was climaxing during their love-making, she could have jammed one of her own digits inside his "flower" and gave him the most thrilling orgasm of his life. And, don't ask me how I know this. Let's just say I do a lot of reading.
A steamy tail, er, a-h-h-h-h, heh-heh... I mean, tale, Lance.
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A little romp in the rump is never a bad thing as long as you have a willing partner. And in my case, as long as it's a female.
She may have enjoyed herself once the initial shock wore off. But bully for Grace's loving hubby to realize that it really wasn't what she'd wanted at all. She could have even turned the tables on Jason if she'd been a bit bolder. Even a man's G-spot is up inside his derriere. As he was climaxing during their love-making, she could have jammed one of her own digits inside his "flower" and gave him the most thrilling orgasm of his life. And, don't ask me how I know this. Let's just say I do a lot of reading.
A steamy tail, er, a-h-h-h-h, heh-heh... I mean, tale, Lance.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2014
Comment from daeneam
Hmmm... I enjoyed the sensuality of the scene as if I was Grace. I want my husband now... lol... Sometimes, we have to be open to such experiences to give a new pleasure to our better-half. I think this also decreases the chances of having extra-marital affairs because we are able to sustain their sexual thrills!
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Hmmm... I enjoyed the sensuality of the scene as if I was Grace. I want my husband now... lol... Sometimes, we have to be open to such experiences to give a new pleasure to our better-half. I think this also decreases the chances of having extra-marital affairs because we are able to sustain their sexual thrills!
Comment Written 23-Jun-2014
Comment from DanielEkine
Very steamy. Definitely for adults only. Sizzling and beautiful. Great job with description. The SPAG is tantalizing, and the flow is titillating. Keep them coming. You have an audience. This would be an erotic book to the core.
"I pulled out my finger and held it out to him. "Do you want to taste it?"
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Very steamy. Definitely for adults only. Sizzling and beautiful. Great job with description. The SPAG is tantalizing, and the flow is titillating. Keep them coming. You have an audience. This would be an erotic book to the core.
"I pulled out my finger and held it out to him. "Do you want to taste it?"
Comment Written 23-Jun-2014
Comment from tbacha58
Hello Sir Lancelot, oh my God, that is one and only sexy story ever told. You have the pen Sir Roy, and this story reminded me, a grandmother now, how I wish I was still young. The way you wrote it, is so beautiful, the words are so sensitive and sincere, nothing rough or ugly was penned here. I really really enjoyed reading it. Beautiful. Well done.
My stars from Montreal will shine above you for another night like this story. Good luck young man. Hugs Terry xoxo
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Hello Sir Lancelot, oh my God, that is one and only sexy story ever told. You have the pen Sir Roy, and this story reminded me, a grandmother now, how I wish I was still young. The way you wrote it, is so beautiful, the words are so sensitive and sincere, nothing rough or ugly was penned here. I really really enjoyed reading it. Beautiful. Well done.
My stars from Montreal will shine above you for another night like this story. Good luck young man. Hugs Terry xoxo
Comment Written 22-Jun-2014
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
This definitely belongs in adults only, over 18. I suggest you move it there at once. It's not the kind of thing I enjoy reading. I skimmed it and realized it is in the wrong place, and that's all I wanted to see of it. I'm not a prude by any means. I just do not enjoy reading about graphic sex--I'd rather do it.
No offense taken and none meant. Just not my kind of story. :)
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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This definitely belongs in adults only, over 18. I suggest you move it there at once. It's not the kind of thing I enjoy reading. I skimmed it and realized it is in the wrong place, and that's all I wanted to see of it. I'm not a prude by any means. I just do not enjoy reading about graphic sex--I'd rather do it.
No offense taken and none meant. Just not my kind of story. :)
Comment Written 22-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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Funny, my wife said almost the same thing, until I pointed out that no real sex actually takes place until the very end, and that isn't described much at all. She didn't believe until she read it again, and the look on her face was priceless. She said, "I still think it's dirty." and walked away.
But, I understand your feelings.
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I'm with your wife. It's not the act, but the TALKING about sex so graphically that's really annoying. Sex is not for talking about.... it's for doing, privately. I guess in general women see sex differently than guys. Men might get turned on by such stories, but we women get turned off.
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Oh, do I know some women you should meet. LOL. They loved talking about sex, even during it. A Lot of people enjoy that, but anyway
To error on the side of caution, I placed the story behind the 18 and older wall, so now there would be no doubt about the nature of the story.
There are women on this site who write great erotic tales and enjoy reading and reviewing them. Just check the reviews.
You have a good night, tomorrow it's back to work. Mondays :)
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It does take all kinds... my mistake in grouping all women together, but I'd GUESS I'm with the majority. Could look that up, I think. Have a good week at work. :)
Comment from Antoine Charlemaine
This is a well-planned, well-executed story that arouses on a number of levels. The intimate, sexual love a married couple can share is described thoughtfully and creatively, without being smutty. The emotion of all-giving, all-consuming love, expressed in the passionate experience of lovemaking is brilliantly portrayed. A very enjoyable read. Writing this as a diary entry is also a creative and different approach that is very believable. The photo fits the scene perfectly.
Ant.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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This is a well-planned, well-executed story that arouses on a number of levels. The intimate, sexual love a married couple can share is described thoughtfully and creatively, without being smutty. The emotion of all-giving, all-consuming love, expressed in the passionate experience of lovemaking is brilliantly portrayed. A very enjoyable read. Writing this as a diary entry is also a creative and different approach that is very believable. The photo fits the scene perfectly.
Ant.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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Thank you very much.
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You are welcome.
Comment from sibhus
A very written erotic story. Great descriptions that express the emotional as well the physical in this well crafted story of love and lust.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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A very written erotic story. Great descriptions that express the emotional as well the physical in this well crafted story of love and lust.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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Thank you very much.
Comment from prefabmouse
Very well written and an unexpected surprise ending. I was swept up with every word and carried along in your passion and fear. I loved everything about your story and hope to read more from you. Very exciting.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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Very well written and an unexpected surprise ending. I was swept up with every word and carried along in your passion and fear. I loved everything about your story and hope to read more from you. Very exciting.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Green Lake Girl
Very well done short erotic story, Lancellot. Such a great surprise ending. Tastefully done and very entertaining. Great job.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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Very well done short erotic story, Lancellot. Such a great surprise ending. Tastefully done and very entertaining. Great job.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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Thank you very much.
Comment from T. J. Hamilton
Very well written, lancellot. I think you really captured the passion and love together. You turned a relatively taboo experience into something beautiful. I'm glad this was between a husband and wife, something that makes it less shocking to more prudish readers (like me if I'm honest). In a shocking way this has opened up my mind to erotic writing, and I am considering writing one of my own. I'm going to upgrade this to six stars for that very reason. Very moving.
Cheers,
-T. J. Hamilton
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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Very well written, lancellot. I think you really captured the passion and love together. You turned a relatively taboo experience into something beautiful. I'm glad this was between a husband and wife, something that makes it less shocking to more prudish readers (like me if I'm honest). In a shocking way this has opened up my mind to erotic writing, and I am considering writing one of my own. I'm going to upgrade this to six stars for that very reason. Very moving.
Cheers,
-T. J. Hamilton
Comment Written 22-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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Thank you very much, T.J. I really appreciate the great review. I look forward to ready your tale.
lance
