The Trining
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "DOCTREX SPINS A YARN"A man must discover his identity and destiny.
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Comment from c_lucas
There is a time when one is accused of speaking untruths. For some, the accusation holds true. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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There is a time when one is accused of speaking untruths. For some, the accusation holds true. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.
Comment Written 04-May-2014
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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Charlie, you are so kind. Your words moved me. Yes, it was a good movement.
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You're welcome, Jay. Charlie
Comment from padumachitta
Hello.Thank you for another chpater. I like the way this iz written.The story being told, to a child,the story asort of hedge of the truth...we have all been there, the adult with holding froma child'z direct question..
Please keep writing...
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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Hello.Thank you for another chpater. I like the way this iz written.The story being told, to a child,the story asort of hedge of the truth...we have all been there, the adult with holding froma child'z direct question..
Please keep writing...
Comment Written 04-May-2014
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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Thank you so so much, padumachitta! Your words mean a lot to me. I'm glad to have you reading my novel!
Comment from country ranch writer
everything is always different at night than day and the mind tends to make you think there is something out there in the dark make the trees rattle but it is just the wind
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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everything is always different at night than day and the mind tends to make you think there is something out there in the dark make the trees rattle but it is just the wind
Comment Written 04-May-2014
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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Rattle! Now that was the word I was looking for!! Thank you so much for your kindness AND the 6-er. Much appreciated, friend.
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welcome----S M I L E S
Comment from emrpoems
Good character development
Good dialogue and interaction between characters.
Story moved at a steady pace
Thanks for the author's notes, they really helped
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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Good character development
Good dialogue and interaction between characters.
Story moved at a steady pace
Thanks for the author's notes, they really helped
Comment Written 04-May-2014
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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Thank you for stopping by and enjoying it. Hope to have you back again.
Comment from JB Lynn
I really enjoyed this fantastical "ghost story" being told at the dinner table. I think your descriptions of the little sisters being mesmerized and part frightened of the story was done flawlessly! Admittedly, Klea kind of creeps me out.
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reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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I really enjoyed this fantastical "ghost story" being told at the dinner table. I think your descriptions of the little sisters being mesmerized and part frightened of the story was done flawlessly! Admittedly, Klea kind of creeps me out.
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Comment Written 04-May-2014
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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Yeah, Klea does seem to have something up her sleeve, doesn't she? Thanks for catching this chapter, JB. Come back again. This is the first time I have two chapters going at the same time.