Fool
A song lyric24 total reviews
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the picture. I love the poem. It does make a good song. Sometimes we feel like we are fooling ourselves. It is easy to see others fooling themselves. I wonder whey we fool ourselves too. Great work.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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I love the picture. I love the poem. It does make a good song. Sometimes we feel like we are fooling ourselves. It is easy to see others fooling themselves. I wonder whey we fool ourselves too. Great work.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday, Ine
Comment from adewpearl
good alliteration in wonder when or where
effective use of listing and repetition
Time to crie - cry
I really like the emotional intensity of this poem, Ine
Brooke :-)
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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good alliteration in wonder when or where
effective use of listing and repetition
Time to crie - cry
I really like the emotional intensity of this poem, Ine
Brooke :-)
Comment Written 08-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday, Ine
Comment from c_lucas
On a regular basis, one much reflect on self and goals they have set for their life. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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On a regular basis, one much reflect on self and goals they have set for their life. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
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Comment Written 08-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday, Ine
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You're welcome, Ine.
Comment from Dean Kuch
I liked the uniquely presented style of this one, Robina. It almost reads like the lyrics to a song. We all question our reason for existing at times, our purpose in life. I sued to also, until I realized I don't need to have a purpose for being here. I just am...
Interesting write.
There's no time and place for everything,
time to [crie] cry,
time to dream,
there's time to wait
But there's no time to waste no
And I keep wonder(ing) why
I wonder why
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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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I liked the uniquely presented style of this one, Robina. It almost reads like the lyrics to a song. We all question our reason for existing at times, our purpose in life. I sued to also, until I realized I don't need to have a purpose for being here. I just am...
Interesting write.
There's no time and place for everything,
time to [crie] cry,
time to dream,
there's time to wait
But there's no time to waste no
And I keep wonder(ing) why
I wonder why
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Comment Written 08-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday, Ine
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Will do, and you do the same.