Monty and Molly Fall in Love
This is how it all began!47 total reviews
Comment from Maltese Falcon
what a lovely poem you have here. I love the picture as it reminds my of cartoons I used to love as a child. hope to read more from you.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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what a lovely poem you have here. I love the picture as it reminds my of cartoons I used to love as a child. hope to read more from you.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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Thank you very much, Maltese Falcon, I am so pleased you enjoyed it. The illustration came from Corrina's Creations, she illustrated my first book, she is so clever. :) Sandra
Comment from Righteous Riter
Good use of the aabb rhyme scheme. Good end rhyming. Good perfect rhyming with no/so...night/tight...day/way...games/names. Good alliteration. Good story telling. Good complimentary photo followed by a clear message.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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Good use of the aabb rhyme scheme. Good end rhyming. Good perfect rhyming with no/so...night/tight...day/way...games/names. Good alliteration. Good story telling. Good complimentary photo followed by a clear message.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much, RR, for your lovely review of my poem! :) Sandra
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Sandramitchell,
Marvelous piece of Children Poetry beautifully depicting the journey of Monty and Molly's successful love!
Wording is simple, impressive and perfectly matching the theme.
Spontaneous and enchanting flow from the beginning to the end.
Lovely rhyming scheme with lively imagery and pictorial quality.
The most striking lines are:
"2nd stanza + So Monty and Molly got married that day,
and two little babies were soon on their way."
The picture is also worth appreciating, for it enhances the beauty of poem.
Superb!
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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Hello Sandramitchell,
Marvelous piece of Children Poetry beautifully depicting the journey of Monty and Molly's successful love!
Wording is simple, impressive and perfectly matching the theme.
Spontaneous and enchanting flow from the beginning to the end.
Lovely rhyming scheme with lively imagery and pictorial quality.
The most striking lines are:
"2nd stanza + So Monty and Molly got married that day,
and two little babies were soon on their way."
The picture is also worth appreciating, for it enhances the beauty of poem.
Superb!
Comment Written 17-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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What a really lovely review of my poem, I am so pleased you enjoyed it. The 6 stars are an added bonus, thank you! Corrina's Creations, is the illustrator, she is a fantastic artist. I found her on FanArt, and was able to get her to illustrate my first, Timmy and Tommy book. I just saw this one on her Facebook page and wrote the poem underneath it, then she e-mailed me saying I could have it!
Comment from Dom G Robles
I love this poem. Love it from the start up to the end. With the Valentine picture, Monty holding a flower, while Moly looking closely at him, it is so illustrative of sincere love for each other. It is a 5-stanza poem that had all the beauty of rhythm and rhyme. So beautiful indeed that when you read it aloud you notice and feel the measured stress of rhythm and rhyme. My sincere congratulations. Dom
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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I love this poem. Love it from the start up to the end. With the Valentine picture, Monty holding a flower, while Moly looking closely at him, it is so illustrative of sincere love for each other. It is a 5-stanza poem that had all the beauty of rhythm and rhyme. So beautiful indeed that when you read it aloud you notice and feel the measured stress of rhythm and rhyme. My sincere congratulations. Dom
Comment Written 17-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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What an amazing review, thank you so much, Dom. I get a lot of pleasure out of writing about Timmy and Tommy Mouse, and more so when readers enjoy it too. Thank you also for the incredible 6 stars, you are very kind. :) Sandra
Comment from IndianaIrish
What an enjoyable poem, Sandra. It's so nice to read the beginning of your tales. One thing to check on ... I think sunflower is one word.
Smiles,
Karyn : )
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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What an enjoyable poem, Sandra. It's so nice to read the beginning of your tales. One thing to check on ... I think sunflower is one word.
Smiles,
Karyn : )
Comment Written 17-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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ooops! Didn't notice that, thank you, Karen. I am so pleased you like this one, came out by accident because of Corrina, she did the illustration for her fans to use for Valentines Day, but I saw a much better use for it! LOL, she gave the illustration to me as a gift when she read what I had put. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Acquired Taste
What a terrific poem to read to children.
Your rhyming is great and the story is adorable. I do hope you are giving this to a child/children in your family...
Very nice.
AT=/
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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What a terrific poem to read to children.
Your rhyming is great and the story is adorable. I do hope you are giving this to a child/children in your family...
Very nice.
AT=/
Comment Written 16-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much, AT, for your generous review. My grandchildren are always checking and giving my Timmy and Tommy stories their advice as to whether they are good or not. 5 & 6 year olds are quite ruthless in what they say, LOL. xsx Sandra
Comment from DonandVicki
A very cute, adorable poem. I enjoyed the flow and rhyming structure. Acute beginning to a good children's book. DonandVicki
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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A very cute, adorable poem. I enjoyed the flow and rhyming structure. Acute beginning to a good children's book. DonandVicki
Comment Written 16-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much for your lovely review, Don and Vicki. :) Sandra.
Comment from emrpoems
Beautiful poem for children
Cheerful presentation suitable for the kids
Excellent rhyming couplets
Excellent use of enjambment allowing thoughts to flow without any interruption.
also alliteration
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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Beautiful poem for children
Cheerful presentation suitable for the kids
Excellent rhyming couplets
Excellent use of enjambment allowing thoughts to flow without any interruption.
also alliteration
Comment Written 16-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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What a really lovely review, emrpoems, thank you so much, I am really pleased you enjoyed it. :) Sandra
Comment from Smoothiecool
great picture for this
your words allow the reader to see and feel the images portrayed clearly as Monty and Molly fall in love and have children and the nurturing that follows
the rhyme works well flows easy read
cheers Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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great picture for this
your words allow the reader to see and feel the images portrayed clearly as Monty and Molly fall in love and have children and the nurturing that follows
the rhyme works well flows easy read
cheers Smoothiecool
Comment Written 16-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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Thank you so very much, Smoothiecool, I am so very pleased you enjoyed it! :) xsx sandra
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most welcome..SC
Comment from Dawn Munro
Awwwww!!! Perfect rhyme and meter, sweet, sweet story-in-a-poem! How very marvelous, Sandra! I adore Tommy and Timmy, and now I know how it all began. :)
I'm so happy to see you here, dear friend. Much love, Dawn
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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Awwwww!!! Perfect rhyme and meter, sweet, sweet story-in-a-poem! How very marvelous, Sandra! I adore Tommy and Timmy, and now I know how it all began. :)
I'm so happy to see you here, dear friend. Much love, Dawn
Comment Written 16-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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You are a love, Dawn, I had to get my head together again. My mind was just too full of my dear mum, now she has gone, I thought I needed something happy to write about. I will always be sad when I think of mum, but luckily these little fellows help a lot. :) Thank you for your lovely words, my friend. xsx Sandra