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The Heart of Poetry

Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Desert Daisies"
'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway

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Comment from Sylvia Page
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Hi Carolyn,
A beautiful entry for the ABC rhyme contest. I know this one. We have it growing on mountain sides between the tea from rock crevices. This one I am referring to is a trailer. I wonder if it is the same. Best wishes to you.
Blessings,
Sylvia

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2014


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
    Good morning my dear Sylvia (Olivia), These grow rather flatly but do spread. So if on an incline would probably trail. God is so good, next time I see one, I will pretend you are looking at its cousin. LOL Isn't creation marvelous. Love, Carolyn
Comment from Tomes Johnston
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This is a beautiful poem from the author in this piece of writing. It has tempo and pace. I like it a lot. Good luck with the contest.

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 Comment Written 05-Feb-2014


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
    Tomes, I appreciate your thoughtful comments. :-) Carolyn
reply by Tomes Johnston on 05-Feb-2014
    Don't mention it.
Comment from jmdg1954
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Carolyn,

I really enjoyed this ABC poem. I know this isn't a backyard daisy, I'm still a sucker for flowers. I thought it was awesome showing the size compared to your finger.

When will all this blasted snow melt and go away so I can play in my backyard with the grass and flowers and nice earthly growth?

I enjoyed your poem... John

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2014


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
    Good morning John, We have more snow here today as well. I have planned my garden, right down to the small compost pile I plan to start. I get out and dig and sing to the top of my lungs. (Now when... this is going to happen is quite another thing. LOL) I am delighted at the wonderful array of stars and the lovely golden cross. Thank you from the bottom of my heart. :-) Carolyn
Comment from country ranch writer
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Mother nature puts on a display of loveliness just for you on your trip to various places on your vacation it sounds like you have had lots of fun

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 Comment Written 05-Feb-2014


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
    Larry and I love to explore the 'little things' in life. When we were talking marriage (several years ago,) one of the areas we discussed, more deeply than financial matters, was laughter. We try to enjoy each day. Thank you for your sweet observations. :-) Carolyn
reply by country ranch writer on 05-Feb-2014
    welcome