The Heart of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Gist in the Bliss - Part 1"'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway
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Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Hello Carolyn this is well written yes gist is indeed the bliss when you describe it so well this way a poem written with beautiful imagery well done we enjoyed regards Jill and Erick
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Hello Carolyn this is well written yes gist is indeed the bliss when you describe it so well this way a poem written with beautiful imagery well done we enjoyed regards Jill and Erick
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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2013
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Hi there, did you figure out who wrote what? I am glad you enjoyed this. :-) Carolyn
Comment from krys123
Both of you have expressed excellent understanding of this heaven on earth. The beauty of your topic and imagery put trade this to the many words of your poem. This free verse poem is written very well in easy to read. I can see the fun that you both might have endured and writing this together. Thank you for sharing this with everyone. You have a good one and God bless.
AK
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Both of you have expressed excellent understanding of this heaven on earth. The beauty of your topic and imagery put trade this to the many words of your poem. This free verse poem is written very well in easy to read. I can see the fun that you both might have endured and writing this together. Thank you for sharing this with everyone. You have a good one and God bless.
AK
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Comment Written 15-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2013
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Thanks, AK for the great review. Try to pick up Part 2 on 9999pool. Can you figure out who wrote which verses? :-) Carolyn
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You are so welcome Carolyn. I believe the first version written by you. You have a good one