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In the soup !

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Comment from Matthew M.
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This makes such perfect sense to me. It seems so appropriate that a bank that created the poverty would become the same place that would serve the poor. It's sad because it can be so true.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2013
    Yes but does it make sense to the banks? Thanks for reading and reviewing. zanya
Comment from adewpearl
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Good play on words in your title
Strong social commentary in this story of ironic humor. Sometimes it seems like things are that bad, doesn't it?
Brooke

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 Comment Written 28-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2013
    Tnanks for a great review.zanya