kyoka (witches and warlocks)
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Comment from allborn66
This is a delightful poem. I like the humorous twist you added. The word choice is strong. It has a good flow. The picture is perfect.
Barbara
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2013
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This is a delightful poem. I like the humorous twist you added. The word choice is strong. It has a good flow. The picture is perfect.
Barbara
Comment Written 10-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2013
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Thank you so very much~Debbie
Comment from l.raven
HI Debbie, I was getting ready to come to dinner...But I guess I would be dinner...LOL Very funny...Congrats on your Halloween poems that were accepted by the literary journal of publications in 2014...I love your poem...a great write..Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2013
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HI Debbie, I was getting ready to come to dinner...But I guess I would be dinner...LOL Very funny...Congrats on your Halloween poems that were accepted by the literary journal of publications in 2014...I love your poem...a great write..Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 10-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much, Linda. I am glad you enjoyed this~Debbie
Comment from CR Delport
Haha, eh ... oh. :) This is very funny. Poor witches sure had earned a bad reputation :) Now with Halloween approaching, it is even worse. Thanks for sharing this delightful poem that put a smile on my face.
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Haha, eh ... oh. :) This is very funny. Poor witches sure had earned a bad reputation :) Now with Halloween approaching, it is even worse. Thanks for sharing this delightful poem that put a smile on my face.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2013
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Glad it made you smile. Thank you~Debbie
Comment from ElegantButler
A tasty treat for the brain to eat. This poem is so delicious I just gobbled it right up. If it had been a sandwich I would've eaten the crust because it had such wonderful taste.
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A tasty treat for the brain to eat. This poem is so delicious I just gobbled it right up. If it had been a sandwich I would've eaten the crust because it had such wonderful taste.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2013
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Thank you so very much for the lovely review and the 6th star. I am glad you enjoyed it~Debbie
Comment from tfawcus
Sounds delicious if you happen to be a cannibal! A scrumptious little poem for Halloween. One minor typo; 'your' for 'you're'. Much enjoyed this one, Debbie.
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Sounds delicious if you happen to be a cannibal! A scrumptious little poem for Halloween. One minor typo; 'your' for 'you're'. Much enjoyed this one, Debbie.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2013
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Thanks for catching that. I fixed it and appreciate you noticing it and for your kind review~Debbie
Comment from krys123
Thank you Debbie for sharing this bubble, bubble toil and trouble poem with fans, myself and other readers/writers. I really enjoyed this Kyoka poem. I first learned of this also just about a month ago. Because I enjoy writing a tanka very much. The essence of your poem made me laugh and I enjoyed the twist at the end. You have a good one.
AK
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Thank you Debbie for sharing this bubble, bubble toil and trouble poem with fans, myself and other readers/writers. I really enjoyed this Kyoka poem. I first learned of this also just about a month ago. Because I enjoy writing a tanka very much. The essence of your poem made me laugh and I enjoyed the twist at the end. You have a good one.
AK
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Comment Written 10-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2013
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I have developed a fondness for the tanka form. It is hard to find much on kyoka written in English. Have you taken the tanka class? I am. I think it starts Oct 22nd. Thank you so much for your kind review. Have a blessed day~Debbie
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You are so welcome Debbie and no I haven't taken the class
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
Congratulations for the acceptance of your poetry into the literary journal. I enjoyed this one. The Kyoka are new to me, however, I enjoyed the way you have executed this one. Cute, just in time for Halloween. :-)Carolyn
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Congratulations for the acceptance of your poetry into the literary journal. I enjoyed this one. The Kyoka are new to me, however, I enjoyed the way you have executed this one. Cute, just in time for Halloween. :-)Carolyn
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Comment Written 10-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2013
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These are so new to the US that it is hard to find any info on them, but I thought I would give it a whirl. Thank you. Glad you enjoyed, Carolyn~Debbie