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Comment from Righteous Riter
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The writer is very descriptive in this piece. The writer does a good job of leading the reader where the reader needs to go. The photo compliments the piece well as the words bring the photo to life. I see nothing that needs to be added or taken out of this piece. Good job.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
    very kind words. much appreciated
Comment from Jewell McChesney
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This is a wonderfully written poem for this contest. I've read five so far in the list and this is the first one that I've truly enjoyed the quality of poetry.

Your author's notes are adorable. loved it.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
    how very kind and encouraging. thank you very much.
reply by Jewell McChesney on 02-Sep-2013
    You just got my vote. ;)
Comment from pipersfancy
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Nevermore! quoth the Raven, Nevermore! What a brilliant idea, to use the name Lenore to represent all past women in your life!

The imagery in this poem is powerful, and well-created with your expressive choice and arrangement of words.

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 Comment Written 02-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
    it saves me a lot of splanning and Lenore is just so poetic. very kind words. sad but ultimately sweet memories for me. thank you so much.