Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

You certainly can not alter the natural flow of life, that's for certain. No matter how badly you wish to go back into the past, and change or correct wrongs to make them right, you can't. Once you unleash that torrent of water, cascading you along on the paths you've chosen, it's hard to struggle against the current. And, sometimes, we tire, going under all together.

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013

Dean, your review is so very wonderful. I can tell you put so much thought into your response. Thank you, Carolyn

reply by Dean Kuch on 20-Jun-2013

I always try to interpret an artists work as best I can, Carolyn. A great piece of poetry deserves far more than a simple, "Loved it! Great job." You are always welcome...

Comment from Gypsy Starchild

Excellent

This is a very clever little 5-7-5.... I like it a lot... Your syllable count is right on and it made me smile. :) Your choice of art and layout compliment the poem nicely. :)

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013

Sometimes brevity (which is the least of my virtues) work the best. Thanks so much, :-) Carolyn

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, notesandmore, you did an excellent job writing this short 5 7 5 poem about water's inability to go uphill. I enjoyed reading this one

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013

Thanks for the neat comment and the great rating. I am glad you enjoyed this one. Carolyn

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Carolyn,

I really like your short little 5 - 7 - 5 - poem. I love waterfalls and you did a great job in writing this about a Missouri waterfall.

Blessings, Kat

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013

And a Good Morning to you, thanks again for the wonderful comments. Carolyn

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

I have see a waterfall that went up it was inside of a mountain and they used to give tours in the cave to see it. I do not know if they still do or not. It was really neat.

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 Comment Written 20-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013

Isn't nature amazing? :-) Carolyn

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

Water falls downhill
Water can not fall uphill
Never did nor will

Awesome Carolyn and what a gorgeous picture too. You know, waterfalls are one of my favorite things.


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 Comment Written 20-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013

I am glad to hear that you like waterfalls, so do I. Thanks Pam, I am glad you enjoyed this one. Carolyn

reply by Gungalo on 20-Jun-2013

A real favorite of mine. My man wrote and played for me a song called Beneath the Waterfall. It's wonderful.