Want to be your lover
Lyrical poem34 total reviews
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
This sounds to me like it would make a terrific song. It is very poetic and very romantic, and the words are lyrical. I liked the repeating chorus, it fits in well. Giddy
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
This sounds to me like it would make a terrific song. It is very poetic and very romantic, and the words are lyrical. I liked the repeating chorus, it fits in well. Giddy
Comment Written 16-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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Hi Giddy,
thank you my friend for your fine review and the excellent rating, all of which is appreciated. Have a good one and take care.
Kindest thoughts,
James
Comment from ephraim crud, COS.
your wife is very lucky to have you and clearly visa versa. Love the fact you were moved to write these beautiful words after 23 years. Wishing you happiness always, lots of love, Connie xxx
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
your wife is very lucky to have you and clearly visa versa. Love the fact you were moved to write these beautiful words after 23 years. Wishing you happiness always, lots of love, Connie xxx
Comment Written 16-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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Hi Eph and Connie,
thank you for your beautiful sentiments. We had a wonderful day in every way... And I know how lucky I am to have such love in my life... I must have done something right, right?
As always I thank you for your support and wonderful reviews, you are truly appreciated.
Thank you so much for the gold you lay at my feet, I am honored
Kindest loving thoughts,
James xxx
Comment from NicciFaye
I thought this was not only loving but sexy. I personally like
Want to cover you in body breeze
And give you love with endless tease
I'll take you places you only dreamed
My only goal... Just to please
I was like.....body breeze that's deep. Six for you friend
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
I thought this was not only loving but sexy. I personally like
Want to cover you in body breeze
And give you love with endless tease
I'll take you places you only dreamed
My only goal... Just to please
I was like.....body breeze that's deep. Six for you friend
Comment Written 16-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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Hi Nicci,
my favorite lines too. Thank you so much for the way in which you honor my love. I am touched at the way you received it.
I appreciate your reviews and this was a beautiful surprise, thank you. The beautiful gold made it all that much sweeter.
Kindest thoughts,
James
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh James, how supremely wonderful! I sincerely wish you and your wife the very best on your anniversary - thirty years together is marvelous, and your beautiful sentiment is obviously a big reason.
What a lovely poem!
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
Oh James, how supremely wonderful! I sincerely wish you and your wife the very best on your anniversary - thirty years together is marvelous, and your beautiful sentiment is obviously a big reason.
What a lovely poem!
Comment Written 15-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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Hi Dawn,
as always, thank you my dear friend, this was a wonderful review.
We had a wonderful day, all day!
I hope your weekend is going well and your writing muse is flowing with the brilliance of your soul.
I can't wait for your next chapter, yeah you know the one...
Kindest thoughts,
James xx
Comment from Black_Oxygen
This is a beautiful tribute and Love Poem. The words
flow nicely and it is easy to read. The emotions are
powerful and the passion is sincere. The attach photo
is a giant mirror that reflects the message. Thank
You for your creation.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
This is a beautiful tribute and Love Poem. The words
flow nicely and it is easy to read. The emotions are
powerful and the passion is sincere. The attach photo
is a giant mirror that reflects the message. Thank
You for your creation.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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Hi Black O,
thank you so much for this fine review and the stars that accompany it, it is truly appreciated.
Kindest thoughts,
James
Comment from Cookie333
This one sang to me as I read it, how great is that?
I am happily married and will celebrate 30 years in July
Thank you for sharing with us
K
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
This one sang to me as I read it, how great is that?
I am happily married and will celebrate 30 years in July
Thank you for sharing with us
K
Comment Written 15-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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Hi Cookie,
congratulations, for nearly reaching 30 years, where have the years flown too?
Thank you for sinning along, I bet that you sounded better than me. The dogs haven't stopped howling since I put it to music. LOL
Thank you so much for a beautiful review and the stars that accompanied it.
Kindest thoughts,
James xx
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I am afraid that I can't carry a tune in a hand basket, but I do love to sing.
you are very welcome friend.
k
Comment from JM daSilva
Wow! You show that it is possible to have a happy marriage. That's an example for many couples today that don't believe that a marriage can last. Kudos to you and your wife for proving otherwise.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
Wow! You show that it is possible to have a happy marriage. That's an example for many couples today that don't believe that a marriage can last. Kudos to you and your wife for proving otherwise.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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Hi JM,
thanks for the sentiments my good friend.
You know how much I appreciate your reviews and on-going support.
Sorry I'm a bit behind on my reviews, I'm way behind and I can't seem to catch up. But no matter I will keep plugging on so just know they will come! Take care.
Kindest thoughts,
James xx
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I know. Don't worry about anything. Have a nice day.
Comment from 4tun81
Congratulations on a successful 30 year relationship and a well written tribute to your love. I think you are keenly aware of what you need to do to last another 30 years. Thanks for posting.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2013
Congratulations on a successful 30 year relationship and a well written tribute to your love. I think you are keenly aware of what you need to do to last another 30 years. Thanks for posting.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2013
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Hi Fortunate 1,
thank you for your wonderful review and your kind sentiments, we appreciate it very much. Hope your weekend is a beautiful one,take care.
Kindest thoughts,
James
Comment from kiwijenny
I love this and especially the author notes. I like that you still feel this way after 30 years together. I like the photo too.
Thank you and God bless.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2013
I love this and especially the author notes. I like that you still feel this way after 30 years together. I like the photo too.
Thank you and God bless.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2013
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Hi Jenny,
thanks very much for this wonderful review and your sentiments too.
Kindest thoughts,
James xx
Comment from Eigle Rull
This piece is a beautiful tribute to the love of your life. Your words are perfect in bringing your thoughts to the reader. It was easy to read and understand because the flow was pretty good. It held my attention very well, and I found no errors. I enjoyed reading this piece. It was excellent.
Always with respect,
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2013
This piece is a beautiful tribute to the love of your life. Your words are perfect in bringing your thoughts to the reader. It was easy to read and understand because the flow was pretty good. It held my attention very well, and I found no errors. I enjoyed reading this piece. It was excellent.
Always with respect,
Comment Written 15-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2013
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Hi Eigle,
thank you for your fine review and your excellent rating, most appreciated.
Kindest thoughts,
James