Comment from humpwhistle

Excellent

This sounds more like the beginning of a story, than a
complete story. I know how hard it is to complete a story in 100 words, but that's the challenge.
Best of luck at the polls.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2013

Thank you for taking the time to look at this.

Comment from marijmd

Excellent

Great image - yikes I feel it. A beast behind bars and still a threat to humankind. Best of luck in the contest!!! Nice job.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2013

Thank you for your kind review.

Comment from Rosalyne

Excellent

Well done. I like the twist on the Warden being the corrupt rather than the inmates themselves.
One question: who are the people that knew he was a killer, were they the other guards or inmates.
Best of luck with the contest
Bye
Rosalyne

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2013

Thanks for reviewing. Wardens are assigned to penitentiaries by state or federal arms of the justice system. This story intimates that they may be scratching an itch by sending a homicidal warden into a prison to thin the herd.

Comment from highlander104

Excellent

Well, lucky Warden Sanders. Good write with well chosen words. This short, short story is full of suspense right until the last line.

Good luck in the contest.

Jean K.

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 Comment Written 08-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2013

Thank you very much for the kind review.