The Final Storm
love is ageless23 total reviews
Comment from Carolyn Hilliard
I wish more couples could go this way; together or very close to the same moment. I would prefer to not live without my husband.
I enjoyed your love story and thank you.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2013
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I wish more couples could go this way; together or very close to the same moment. I would prefer to not live without my husband.
I enjoyed your love story and thank you.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2013
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And I have lived as a widow for fourteen years and understand the depth of lonliness that can overtake you when the one person who knows you best must go. Thanks for your generous stars.
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
This is really good, but a little sad. However I know when couples have been together so long they really don't want to live without each other. This is well written, I see no errors and have no suggestions on how to improve it. I wish you good success with the contest.
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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2013
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This is really good, but a little sad. However I know when couples have been together so long they really don't want to live without each other. This is well written, I see no errors and have no suggestions on how to improve it. I wish you good success with the contest.
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Comment Written 29-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2013
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Thank you. I think the older you get, the easier it is to accept that life is not a forever plan. Enjoy what you have.
Comment from Katniss Everdeen
This is a awesome story. The beginning has good description and the end has a nice twist. I loved the phrase, "Feeling his own age." It shows that you thought out a great description for each character, even the doctor.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2013
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This is a awesome story. The beginning has good description and the end has a nice twist. I loved the phrase, "Feeling his own age." It shows that you thought out a great description for each character, even the doctor.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2013
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Your very generous review and the stars are greatly appreciated. Some stories burrow into you inner core and come through as if they were channeled. My job then is to only make sure I document the story as its been told to me. Thank you.