Christopher Colby
Spoilt kids aren't happy kids.22 total reviews
Comment from humpwhistle
I like this a lot, Beth. Tight rhymes and flowing
meter. I'm sure 10-year-olds can relate to this poem.
That there ends up to be a happy ending
is icing on the cake.
Best of luck in the voting, Beth.
Peace, Lee
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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012
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I like this a lot, Beth. Tight rhymes and flowing
meter. I'm sure 10-year-olds can relate to this poem.
That there ends up to be a happy ending
is icing on the cake.
Best of luck in the voting, Beth.
Peace, Lee
with all the new (trends)
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Comment Written 23-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012
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Thank you Lee, I'm glad you like it. I appreciate the good wishes and the stars.
Beth
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I honestly believe that children are more comfortable when they have limits they have to follow. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Good luck.
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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012
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I honestly believe that children are more comfortable when they have limits they have to follow. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Good luck.
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Comment Written 23-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2012
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Thank you Barbara. I agree with you. I appreciate the review and comments.
Beth