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A Dollar For Dooley

Ghosts and gold

26 total reviews 
Comment from robina1978
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Nice photo of a donkey to compliment your story. So nice about this donkey and his boss. Liked the accent you used. Dooley would not move and he turned out to be so right as they got caught by warriors. Held my attention all the way. Liked it.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2012

reply by the author on 24-Feb-2012
    Hi there!! More late thanks!! But most sincere! I am always happy to hear from you and wish you all the best in your writing too!! HUG! Susan
Comment from c_lucas
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This is very well written and you draw your reader into your story. There is a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. Note: The mystery of the Lost Dutchman Mine was solved a few years back.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2012

reply by the author on 24-Feb-2012
    Hi Charley! Thank you and i do apologize for this late note...SO sorry. Just getting catched up! :) HUG! Susan
reply by c_lucas on 24-Feb-2012
    You're welcome, Susan. Charlie
Comment from Chris Tee
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This is rather stunning work, you have written here for us old sport. I like the accent you incorporated here and it makes the story so real. Well done indeed with this splendid work.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2012

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2012
    Hi Chris, my kind and faithful reader! Your words mean so much...you just can't know and I will only try to let you know how I appreciate this encouragement! Wow....smiles to you and your family Chris...Susan
reply by Chris Tee on 20-Jan-2012
    You can always pop my a reviewers vote my dear.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2012
    Thank you Chris! Hug...s.
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
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Wow that was a very dramatic piece of writing. Hi Ssan I loved this you kept the flw of the story at a nice pace, I enjoyed it ery much. Thanks Mary

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2012

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2012
    Hi Mary! Thank you and especially for 'listening' to the old fella swearing! It's how men are...well, most. lol! Many many thank you's my friend. Susan
Comment from robyn corum
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It is a fascinating story. I typically don't read stories with hard language, but I missed the note. This was very well written. I enjoyed

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 Comment Written 20-Jan-2012

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2012
    Dear Roberta...I am especially happy you enjoyed this...since you do not like swear words...they had to be in this tho!! It's just how poor Dobbs was. :)) Thank you very very much. xoxo, Susan
Comment from FlamingSpade
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Your story was fascinating as well. I'm not normally drawn to westerns but I wanted to spread my horizons. I am glad I did on this early hour. I was with you from beginning to end.

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 Comment Written 20-Jan-2012

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2012
    Hey! I'm thrilled that you read this for me. I like to try different things too, so had to incorporate the reality of poor old Dobbs...and the demise of little Dooley. Lol! What a grand review...special thanks from me to you! Susan