Another Pretty Face
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Chapter 15; part one"Can love survive small town gossip?
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Comment from jamesfrancis
James from Jamesfrancis.nl
Enjoyed your piece; I am enjoying reading other peoples entries too; yours ranks highly in my eyes. Hope to see more from you; I shall add you as a friend. Hope your health breaks ahead :) best of luck
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James from Jamesfrancis.nl
Enjoyed your piece; I am enjoying reading other peoples entries too; yours ranks highly in my eyes. Hope to see more from you; I shall add you as a friend. Hope your health breaks ahead :) best of luck
Comment Written 31-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and support.
Comment from BethShelby
Wow, He must have been pretty sure of her to go to all that expense before he asked to to marry him. You'd have to really know a person well to know how they would react. Most brides want to make all the decisions themselves. This has been taken out of her hands but so has a lot of stress.
How romantic can you get? All I can say is wow.
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Wow, He must have been pretty sure of her to go to all that expense before he asked to to marry him. You'd have to really know a person well to know how they would react. Most brides want to make all the decisions themselves. This has been taken out of her hands but so has a lot of stress.
How romantic can you get? All I can say is wow.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review. Sara questions his control issues, but will she say yes???
Comment from pickthorn
Great romantic story. You have a talent for bringing your characters to life and involving your readers in the story as the plot unfolds. Good job, good writing. Pickthorn
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Great romantic story. You have a talent for bringing your characters to life and involving your readers in the story as the plot unfolds. Good job, good writing. Pickthorn
Comment Written 31-Jan-2011
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Thank you for yoru kind review.
Comment from Paula Andrea Pyle
When a person wants a story to be engaging, it usually isn't'. sorta like a 'much too reviewed movie." However, you have a gift to entertain.
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When a person wants a story to be engaging, it usually isn't'. sorta like a 'much too reviewed movie." However, you have a gift to entertain.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and encouraging words.
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certainly...
Comment from missy98writer
Barbara,
I loved chapter thirty-five and I'm happy you posted this chapter. You did an superb job writing this chapter in your romance. Joe is my favorite male character you've written. Sara was thrilled by his surprise wedding. Ginger Moore had to say something nasty, what a bitch. Your dialogue is excellent and your narrative is superb. I'm a sucker for a happy ending, unless Sara will throw a wrench into it. I noticed you have eleven pages. Post them! Keep on kicking cancers butt!
Melissa.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2011
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Barbara,
I loved chapter thirty-five and I'm happy you posted this chapter. You did an superb job writing this chapter in your romance. Joe is my favorite male character you've written. Sara was thrilled by his surprise wedding. Ginger Moore had to say something nasty, what a bitch. Your dialogue is excellent and your narrative is superb. I'm a sucker for a happy ending, unless Sara will throw a wrench into it. I noticed you have eleven pages. Post them! Keep on kicking cancers butt!
Melissa.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2011
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Sara will throw her usual wrench into things. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from bhogg
Such a romantic post. I'm a crusty old guy, but I got a little teary eyed on this one. You have a remarkable talent to pull your reader in. I'm invested in your story. Always warm regards, Bill
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Such a romantic post. I'm a crusty old guy, but I got a little teary eyed on this one. You have a remarkable talent to pull your reader in. I'm invested in your story. Always warm regards, Bill
Comment Written 31-Jan-2011
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So you are really a softy, right? Thank you for your kind review.
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Let's just say I'm very comfortable with my sensitive side!
Comment from bookishfabler
Because I don't typically read too many romances I can't say anything about the wedding thing being a bit too put together and perfect. Being I write and read murder and myham, tying things up doesn't mean everyone lives happily ever after. Well, I need the characters to come backa nd deal with outher stuff down the road. Two different genres.
Okay, I think this is a fun and wonderful book.
Before he could answer, she pointed to the roses. "The bride must love roses as much as I do." She stopped and stared. "White and yellow roses." She pointed to the archway. "I've never seen it decorated with pink roses (pointed- pointed too close together.
NOt here is anything wrong with this, but apparently one of your signatures is gulping. I rarely read it and your characters do it a lot. LOL.
hugs book
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2011
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Because I don't typically read too many romances I can't say anything about the wedding thing being a bit too put together and perfect. Being I write and read murder and myham, tying things up doesn't mean everyone lives happily ever after. Well, I need the characters to come backa nd deal with outher stuff down the road. Two different genres.
Okay, I think this is a fun and wonderful book.
Before he could answer, she pointed to the roses. "The bride must love roses as much as I do." She stopped and stared. "White and yellow roses." She pointed to the archway. "I've never seen it decorated with pink roses (pointed- pointed too close together.
NOt here is anything wrong with this, but apparently one of your signatures is gulping. I rarely read it and your characters do it a lot. LOL.
hugs book
Comment Written 31-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2011
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I try to switch from swallowing and gulping. I used to shake heads and got away from that so I will work on gulping. I will take care of the pointing. Thank you.
Comment from Fireshadow
Wow, Barbara ! That's quite a terrific surprise Joe sprung on Sara, and, of course, her bewildered reaction is understandable. Another excellent segment for this wonderful story. Very well done, my friend.
Ama
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2011
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Wow, Barbara ! That's quite a terrific surprise Joe sprung on Sara, and, of course, her bewildered reaction is understandable. Another excellent segment for this wonderful story. Very well done, my friend.
Ama
Comment Written 31-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Belinda
Hi, this is a perfect way to describe a perfect wedding, wirh roses, beautiful dresses, and all. I feel like I can picture Sara in her gown, and even Cassie in her tea length bridesmaid gown. Lucky Sara!
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Hi, this is a perfect way to describe a perfect wedding, wirh roses, beautiful dresses, and all. I feel like I can picture Sara in her gown, and even Cassie in her tea length bridesmaid gown. Lucky Sara!
Comment Written 31-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from patmedium
This section is lovely, dear ... talk about misty-eyed dreaming!
And as for you ... I think of you often. I hope you are still showing up at school through all this? I am looking forward to your getting the 'all-clear' at the end of this treatment. xxx
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2011
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This section is lovely, dear ... talk about misty-eyed dreaming!
And as for you ... I think of you often. I hope you are still showing up at school through all this? I am looking forward to your getting the 'all-clear' at the end of this treatment. xxx
Comment Written 31-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2011
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How are you doing? Yes, I am continuing to work with my first graders. I am waiting for the all clear from my doctor, and it hasn't come yet. Thank you for the kind review.